Hannah

hey, girl. this is true and this is right, but i think that we need to take it just a little bit away from the blunt truth and give it ...

I had a long review typed up and the site decided to die on me, so here's what I want to say in grumpy-short-format: Keep time clear. I don't know ...

Hey again, Seastormy. I want to come out first and congratulate you on a fantastic couplet in your last stanza: Because, for skeptics who believe they are wiser, The subtle ...

Hey, freedomgirl! I see you've been with us a week. Welcome to YWS if I haven't already said so~ The first thing you need to do before you post works ...

I have to say this piece has a lot of potential, but there are a lot of things holding it back. For one, there are so many points in this ...

Hey, Nike! What's this? It's so short. Did you mean to post more with it? In any case, I do have some comments about what little is here. The first ...

Hey there, FantasyWriter! Welcome to YWS~ The first thing I have to say is that usually people say to avoid prologues. I know we like a little introduction to our ...

I was way more moved by your explanation than I was by the poem, which says a lot about your power with prose. You had so much clarity in your ...

I am so glad to see you're already dishing out quality reviews in the poetry forum. And I want to welcome you by tackling this big piece of somethin' somethin' ...

Hey girl! This is an interesting challenge, and I think you faced it admirably. You brought out a lot of specifics that could bring us closer to your feeling of ...

Hey, Lylas. Not sure if you've read my review on the other poem you asked me to review, but I have many of the same things to say here. You're ...

So, I was not very engaged with this poem until you wrote this: You lost her beauty And she gained everything. Her laugh erupts and the earth shakes Her tears ...

Uh oh~ After running into a bunch of poems that handled rhyming well, I'm sad to have to say that you've let the rhymes run your poem. You started with ...

Hey there! I don't think I've happened upon anything by you before, so this is a nice treat. :) I love the opening line absolutely. Nothing will ever make me ...

Hey! What are you, some new kid? This is awesome! I'm glad you've arrived, 'cause I wanna be the one to say I knew you when your first work was ...