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Re: untitled
Title - "untitled" In my opinion, I think this poem could possibly be titled "Yin and Yang." I don't know; it just sparked my mind when reading the first stanza. ...
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Re: "Roses"
I could perfectly imagine the similes and metaphors as well as analogies and personifications you so vividly and aesthetically prettily written. The first stanza feels like a Sapphic poem comparing ...
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Re: School aka Prison
Title - "School aka Prison" Honestly, from the perspective of a high school student in 2023, this is somewhat a version of the truth. School can be a prison, but ...
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Re: Over 13: The AIM Tango
Title - "The AIM Tango" I don't understand the reference to "AIM," but I'm assuming it's a place where you can message others back and forth. All of these messages ...
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Re: The Gates
Interpretations/Commentaries (Only of Stanza One): Line One (stars whispered,) - According to All the Science, there are between 30 and 70 billion trillion stars in the universe. And Google's definiti
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Re: Oh Gray Threads!
Note: Wow! Congrats on being the second published written work on this writing website! Interpretations: I'm stuck on which piece of clothing this poem could be referring to because the ...
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Re: Death Wish
Note: Congratulations on being the first written work on Young Writer's Society! That is majorly impressive. Kudos to you for taking the first step and publishing this short story. Although ...
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Re: HOMESICK
Interpretations/Commentaries: Title - "HOMESICK" According to Google, homesick is an adjective that means "experiencing a longing for one's home during a period of absence from it." The fact that you ...
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Re: A compilation of Short writings
Interpretations/Commentaries: "The moment brings a memory, fading in - a sudden thought. Then time stood still, I get a chill, thinking of things I wish I forgot." This piece is ...
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Re: Burning
First of all, the title - "Burning" I should've known it was about fire from the title. According to Google, burning means "on fire." I also should've known that I ...
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Re: A Blind Affair
Overall, it's understandable. The storyline is pretty simple to follow along. It's so sad that Adam dies while Alice cannot save him for she cannot see. It was refreshing to ...
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Re: Kittehs, Kittehs, and More Kittehs =^.^=
This is a short, sweet, and simple literary work. There isn't much to say about it, nor can one really analyze or review it in-depth. But I like it. Because ...
Jan 17, 2023 -
Re: From Juju the Amazing Polar Bear
This left me in confusion. This is random. It tingles my brain in a weird way. But I like that it left me in confusion. I like how random it ...
Jan 17, 2023 -
Re: "Add New Work"
This is a fun and enjoyable mini lyrical literary work that I like because of its simplicity and straightforwardness. There seems to be no need for a real in-depth analysis ...
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Re: Crush vs. Cookie
This is a succinct lyrical literary work about a crush, an infatuation, and true love. It's straightforward and understandable full of similes and metaphors. Each section of comparison to a ...
Jan 17, 2023
