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"Add New Work"

by luckystar3000


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I just clicked "Add New Work" and

here I am typing and

a fly is buzzzing by my ear and

I'm wondering what the difference is

between scream

and yell.


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Wed Apr 18, 2012 1:53 am
creativityrules wrote a review...



Hey, Lucky! I'm Rosie! :D

Overall, this is a cute little piece. Considering its size, I quite like it; it's cute and has a lot of personality. My favorite part is the last two lines. My mind thinks like that, comparing words and phrases in my mind and considering what's the same about them and what's different. I'm sort of strange that way. :D

So, anyway, I just thought I'd let you know that I like this and that I think it's endearing. I hope to see more of your work!

Always keep writing!

-Rosie






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