Published March 10, 2013
How can you bear to get up when you have one of the cutest kittehs in the world purring on your lap?
The cat is just sitting there and drifting off, and you want to get up to get something and your like: "Cat, get up and get off mai lap,I don't want to wake you."
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The cat laying on the speaker’s lap is clearly meant to symbolize procrastination in ADHD; the speaker is trying to get something done, however they fall victim to procrastination. Due to the imbalance of dopamine in the ADHD brain, procrastination seems more appealing than actually accomplishing things. This is shown when the cat is laying on the speaker’s lap, and the speaker would rather stay there and not wake the cat than move the cat off of their lap. The deep message really spoke to me here, phenomenal work!
[for legal reasons this is a joke, but this next sentence isn’t: good job!]
This is a short, sweet, and simple literary work. There isn't much to say about it, nor can one really analyze or review it in-depth. But I like it. Because the question is sold, very valid and super important. Perhaps it's something to ponder without responding with a solid answer. Maybe Swiftfur just is wondering and putting it out there for other kitty/cat lovers and people in general. I like the personal way you spelled kitty. It's cute just like cats are.
- Lil, aka HalfheartedAmateur
i have to agre. but i thank it is a littul short but it is okay, and you spelld "my" wrong, it is not speld mai it is my.
the incorrect spelling was intentional
Hello Swiftfur.
You have no idea how many times I've done exactly what you've stated there.
I must agree with BlackNether12, this needs to be longer.
A lot of the time you will find really short writings that could have been amazing had the author made it longer. And I believe this to be one of those.
I understand how a lot of people will sometimes put "eh" at the end of a word, because it has become a sort of slang. But I do believe, while it is fine to use it in the title, I think this piece would be much more appealing if it was not used in the actual writing. And while you where probably trying to make it sound cool by titling it Kittehs, Kittehs, and Kore Kittehs, I think it would be much better if you spelled "more" with an M instead of a K.
Although yes, kittens/cats are so adorable when they sleep in your lap. I always have a hard time moving them.
~WW
Hrm, okay for my review.
Well . . . there ain't much thar?!
I do admit, I find it rather hard to get my cat off of my lap. Though not because I'm soft on him, no, but he has this mega-annoying habit of mistaking people for trees and A) Try's to sharpen his claws on them (OHWWWWWWWWW!) or B) Climbs them and sits on that hand perch between the shoulders.
Not kidding.
Well, at least my dog doesn't have similar mistaking problems
O.o
I think the nit-pikers already got this.
I haveth one order - Enlargeth muchly.
~Black~
Speaking from personal experiences when a cat is on my lap, I get up when I begin to lose feeling in my legs. Cramps, and all that, you know. I don't want to be a paraplegic.
You spelled 'More' wrong.
O_o
I suggest posting rants in the blog area.
But if you had developed this into a story comprising of past events which involved the cat, to make it seem cute, it would've have been interesting.