Hadj

Another poem about the seasons. I'll be honest, reading this one I actually couldn't instantly tell which season was which- at first I thought the first stanza was meant to ...

Hey there, Initial Thoughts/Critiques This poem was interesting. My first comment was going to call out your rhyme scheme- which being inconsistent as it is, brings some confusion and hurts ...

It's a poem. I respect the attempt at writing from a creative point of view and trying to analyze thoughts of God and how he reacts to his people. It ...

Hey there! Hadj here to review your poem! (thus earning his third star ^.^) Criticism Punctuation/Capitalization I know that different poems feature a lot of different styles of punctuation, but ...

Hey there Nunyabusiness, Hadj here to review your poem! Criticism Rhythm Just wanted to mention that the rhythm of this poem didn't seem to flow very well, especailly in the ...

Hey there! Hadj here to review! Criticism I really loved this piece, but there are a few things that bothered me: 1) "She's made of glass; and so are the ...

Hey there WaltzingDreams, Hadj here for my first review in 7 months! This poem was kind of creative, but there was a lot that was awkward to read, and it ...

Hey there aydenini! Hadj here to review! Nitpick Line 2: "Scales like a forges flame" You need an apostrophe to show possession: "Scales like a forge's flame" Criticism In a ...

Hey Maverick! Hadj here to review! Nitpicks! Stanza 2, Line 1: "But looking at butterflies is dangerous," No "," necessary! Criticism As much as I liked this poem, I really ...

Hey there Emily! I just read this work, and skimmed the reviews. Unfortunately, I don't have a lot of time, but I'll give a do my best to state my ...

Right, and wrong. I assume this work was written on your perspective of reviewing on YWS. I know that many users, especially newer users, become worried about criticizing the work ...

Hey! Hadj here to review! This poem was... interesting! I'm not sure I completely understood it, but I'll do my best to review it! Analysis I take it this poem ...

Hey! Hadj here to review your art! I'm only going to review the second one, because its more of a finished product Criticism Anatomy Looking at this, I think the ...

Hey there! Hadj here to review your art! Criticism Anatomy First off, the tail of your bird is off center. With his wings so perfectly symmetrical, it looks awkward to ...

Hey there lyssiekins! Hadj here to review your poem! (GO TEAM BLACK!) Nitpicks It may have been on purpose, but I was bothered by the fact that you didn't capitalize ...