Oh, and a correction- when I say 'My First Fanart', I mean my first fanart [b]on this site[/b]. I've done loads of fanart before X3 skills.Hey! Hadj here to review your art!
I'm only going to review the second one, because its more of a finished product
Criticism
Anatomy
Looking at this, I think the biggest problem I saw was Aragorn's left arm. I'm sure you're aware, that shoulders don't usually cover one's cheek 
This was incredibly distracting to me, and I think that if his left shoulder matched his right, the entire picture would be more enjoyable to look at 
It wasn't as noticeable, but his head is also rather squashed into his neck. Overall, Aragorn's upper body is pretty sloppily connected.
Lighting
The lighting in this is weird. The lighter strip on Arwen's hair doesn't appear to match the lighting of her clothes. The bead lacked shading, which looked a little bit awkward, and a mysterious white spot was sitting under her bed. This was probably meant to be part of the bed, but it was so white, it looked unnatural. I would recommend shading the side of the bed, as if an overhead light is somewhere in the room, and then adjusting the lighting of Arwen's hair and clothes accordingly.
Design
The flowers on the bed annoyed me quite a bit. They looked like a little kid took a flower stamp and tried to color in the entire bed (no offense). I think if there was more of a pattern and less overlap between flowers, the bed would look much more artistic.
Praise
Overall, nice work. I'm a huge LOTR fan and have read the trilogy, along with Silmarillion and Children of Huron multiple times. I think you're definitely a talented artist, but you still need work.
Keep on drawing
Hadj
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