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Katie Frain

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: I've been trying

    Hmmm, this is interesting. This poem is well written, but I actually lost interest in the second stanza. If you can manage to make this poem, more interesting- have a ...

    Jan 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: (Deleted)

    Hi, GreenTulip here to offer you a review. I like the poem, but some of your stanza's have some confusing phrasing that I will get to in a bit. First, ...

    Jan 25, 2014
  • Short Story » Horror, Other Re: Sister's Keeper

    Wow, this was really good. This is amazingly well written, and it is well done. I love how you start the chapter with what happens at the end. It gives ...

    Jan 24, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Spilled blood fades into the dirt.

    Okay...I am going to be blunt about this. I do not see at all the reason for the first and last stanza. The second and third stanzas are talking about ...

    Jan 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: I see a...

    Wow, this is a *very* short but powerful poem. This can be a poem that shows the thoughts of an angry girlfriend or maybe even an angry wife. With the ...

    Jan 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Declare War

    Wow, this is very well written poem. This poem shows what war or any type of controversy can be like from a country that is only neutral and observes. It ...

    Jan 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: The Field Of Time

    Hi, my promised review that I promised you this morning. I have just one single word that I can use to describe this and it is: Amazing. This is well ...

    Jan 23, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Jazz Hands

    This is an interesting poem, but I have a few things to offer, if I may. So in the following I will give you some advice on how to separate ...

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: My Best Friend

    Wow, this poem doesn't just show the relationship between two best friends but it could also show the relationship between a very close couple. The poem itself was kinda hard ...

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: That's All

    This is a very good poem, really powerful with the force of emotion that is behind it. It summarizes 'time' very well. Sometimes we can hate time- it comes to ...

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Black and white photo

    Dang, this is an amazing pom. I love how you incorporate how the black and white effects of a photo. It made the poem seem better, as if you had ...

    Jan 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Mirror

    Wow....that is one of the words that I can use to describe this poem. It has such a powerful emotion behind it- realization. The poem touches upon the one thing ...

    Jan 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Roses are Red

    Hi, GreenTulip here to give you an insightful review. Okay, I am going to be blunt- I am going to offer some suggestions for ways you can make this better. ...

    Jan 14, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Silent Plea

    Wow a strong emotional piece of poetry. This is wonderfully written, and I am glad that I took the time to stop by and read this poem. Though it is ...

    Jan 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Muted tears

    One may stand within a crowd, surrounded by many people yet feel so alone. They hear the muted conversations of those around them, but never can really join in. We ...

    Jan 14, 2014


Monster is a relative term. To a canary, a cat is a monster. We're just used to being the cat.
— Henry Wu, "Jurassic World"