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Katie Frain

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: I've been trying

    Hmmm, this is interesting. This poem is well written, but I actually lost interest in the second stanza. If you can manage to make this poem, more interesting- have a ...

    Jan 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: (Deleted)

    Hi, GreenTulip here to offer you a review. I like the poem, but some of your stanza's have some confusing phrasing that I will get to in a bit. First, ...

    Jan 25, 2014
  • Short Story » Horror, Other Re: Sister's Keeper

    Wow, this was really good. This is amazingly well written, and it is well done. I love how you start the chapter with what happens at the end. It gives ...

    Jan 24, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Spilled blood fades into the dirt.

    Okay...I am going to be blunt about this. I do not see at all the reason for the first and last stanza. The second and third stanzas are talking about ...

    Jan 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: I see a...

    Wow, this is a *very* short but powerful poem. This can be a poem that shows the thoughts of an angry girlfriend or maybe even an angry wife. With the ...

    Jan 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Declare War

    Wow, this is very well written poem. This poem shows what war or any type of controversy can be like from a country that is only neutral and observes. It ...

    Jan 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: The Field Of Time

    Hi, my promised review that I promised you this morning. I have just one single word that I can use to describe this and it is: Amazing. This is well ...

    Jan 23, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Jazz Hands

    This is an interesting poem, but I have a few things to offer, if I may. So in the following I will give you some advice on how to separate ...

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: My Best Friend

    Wow, this poem doesn't just show the relationship between two best friends but it could also show the relationship between a very close couple. The poem itself was kinda hard ...

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: That's All

    This is a very good poem, really powerful with the force of emotion that is behind it. It summarizes 'time' very well. Sometimes we can hate time- it comes to ...

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Black and white photo

    Dang, this is an amazing pom. I love how you incorporate how the black and white effects of a photo. It made the poem seem better, as if you had ...

    Jan 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Mirror

    Wow....that is one of the words that I can use to describe this poem. It has such a powerful emotion behind it- realization. The poem touches upon the one thing ...

    Jan 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Roses are Red

    Hi, GreenTulip here to give you an insightful review. Okay, I am going to be blunt- I am going to offer some suggestions for ways you can make this better. ...

    Jan 14, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Silent Plea

    Wow a strong emotional piece of poetry. This is wonderfully written, and I am glad that I took the time to stop by and read this poem. Though it is ...

    Jan 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Muted tears

    One may stand within a crowd, surrounded by many people yet feel so alone. They hear the muted conversations of those around them, but never can really join in. We ...

    Jan 14, 2014


Sometimes my life just sounds like surrealistic fiction being sold on clearance at the book store.
— J. G. Hammersmith