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Re: I've been trying
Hmmm, this is interesting. This poem is well written, but I actually lost interest in the second stanza. If you can manage to make this poem, more interesting- have a ...
Jan 25, 2014 -
Re: (Deleted)
Hi, GreenTulip here to offer you a review. I like the poem, but some of your stanza's have some confusing phrasing that I will get to in a bit. First, ...
Jan 25, 2014 -
Re: Sister's Keeper
Wow, this was really good. This is amazingly well written, and it is well done. I love how you start the chapter with what happens at the end. It gives ...
Jan 24, 2014 -
Re: Spilled blood fades into the dirt.
Okay...I am going to be blunt about this. I do not see at all the reason for the first and last stanza. The second and third stanzas are talking about ...
Jan 23, 2014 -
Re: I see a...
Wow, this is a *very* short but powerful poem. This can be a poem that shows the thoughts of an angry girlfriend or maybe even an angry wife. With the ...
Jan 23, 2014 -
Re: I Declare War
Wow, this is very well written poem. This poem shows what war or any type of controversy can be like from a country that is only neutral and observes. It ...
Jan 23, 2014 -
Re: The Field Of Time
Hi, my promised review that I promised you this morning. I have just one single word that I can use to describe this and it is: Amazing. This is well ...
Jan 23, 2014 -
Re: Jazz Hands
This is an interesting poem, but I have a few things to offer, if I may. So in the following I will give you some advice on how to separate ...
Jan 19, 2014 -
Re: My Best Friend
Wow, this poem doesn't just show the relationship between two best friends but it could also show the relationship between a very close couple. The poem itself was kinda hard ...
Jan 19, 2014 -
Re: That's All
This is a very good poem, really powerful with the force of emotion that is behind it. It summarizes 'time' very well. Sometimes we can hate time- it comes to ...
Jan 19, 2014 -
Re: Black and white photo
Dang, this is an amazing pom. I love how you incorporate how the black and white effects of a photo. It made the poem seem better, as if you had ...
Jan 15, 2014 -
Re: Mirror
Wow....that is one of the words that I can use to describe this poem. It has such a powerful emotion behind it- realization. The poem touches upon the one thing ...
Jan 14, 2014 -
Re: Roses are Red
Hi, GreenTulip here to give you an insightful review. Okay, I am going to be blunt- I am going to offer some suggestions for ways you can make this better. ...
Jan 14, 2014 -
Re: A Silent Plea
Wow a strong emotional piece of poetry. This is wonderfully written, and I am glad that I took the time to stop by and read this poem. Though it is ...
Jan 14, 2014 -
Re: Muted tears
One may stand within a crowd, surrounded by many people yet feel so alone. They hear the muted conversations of those around them, but never can really join in. We ...
Jan 14, 2014
