Gravity

I loved this story. The only negative thing I have to say is that at one point, you accidentally change the tense. She gets good grades, is kind to everyone ...

Okay so this was difficult to put together. At first you start off all fancy language-ish and metaphor-y (yes I add random syllables at the end of words to make ...

I loved this poem. It was nice and dramatic and paired with the black and white of the piano it makes it suspenseful. I do however have a nitpick. Two, ...

I thought this was lovely. Instead of one haiku that is typically too short to have a lot of feeling, you put together five haikus and managed to give the ...

I loved this poem. I've never seen anything quite like it, and every ingredient in your recipe reads true. I like how you capitalized each ingredient so it stands out. ...

I love this poem. I especially love how you included the picture. In a way, you have your poem set up so it flows freely, but yet still has structure. ...

I loved this. It was beautiful, and typically I like rain. But I also love how you contrasted the light with the rain so it wasn't so depressing. I loved ...

I was surprised when the title of this poem was "Merry Christmas" and your description was a frowny face. I have a few nitpicks, so I'll get to the point. ...

I loved this Palindrome. At first I was a little annoyed because it seems like one person did a palindrome and then another and another... and I saw this in ...

Okay, I will try to be kind, but I'll warn you... reviews can be very harsh. So don't take anything personally. I didn't like this as much as others seemed ...

I was not expecting a haiku. When I clicked on this, I was expecting a long poem that would be tedious to read about some girl's laugh and how this ...

I loved this. I thought this was very well written, and your descriptions were amaze-balls when you described Gale's feelings. I hate fanfiction, but I'm glad I decided to give ...

I loved this. I didn't find a single flaw in grammar or punctuation, or the change from past tense. I laughed SO HARD at this part: “Holy Satan! Calm the ...

I did not read the first chapter, but I am going to review this piece technically. Your piece has so many grammar and punctuation errors. I jumped off the love ...

I'm going to be very honest with you. This isn't a chapter. This is less than a page. The piece of writing you have here is about the length of ...