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Re: Show Me Love
Hey there Carlito! ^_^ Whoa. It's been a long time since the last time I did a review. Okay. I LOVE YOUR POEM. AND I JUST LOVE IT. OMG. I ...
Dec 7, 2013 -
Re: The Brightest Night
Hey there AlfonsoFernandez! :D I really liked your poem and how you described Halloween :D I loved it how you described the colorful and wide array of costumes. This poem ...
Nov 3, 2013 -
Re: Please Stay
Hey there antoniaa! :D Are you speaking about your own life? If so, I know how that feels. I really do. Honestly, don't do anything about it. Just be normal ...
Nov 3, 2013 -
Re: Horrible
Hey there Strange! :D (I wonder why you named yourself strange ._.) Okay, on with the review: Your short poem is really nice. :D I didn't get one part though: ...
Nov 3, 2013 -
Re: The Smile
Hey there thewritersdream! :) I really like your short poem. :D It's very short but surprisingly is quite intriguing. Through just a few words this poem can actually make one ...
Nov 3, 2013 -
Re: If Only
Hey there Cailey! :) Er... since it's a super short poetry... I do not know what to say .-. But I don't know why I find it hilarious xD Oh ...
Nov 2, 2013 -
Re: You
Hey there SaraiRayne :D I don't usually read love poems or anything that falls in "Romance" but it's a good poem. I didn't get the rhyming sequence though. A work ...
Nov 1, 2013 -
Re: Innocence
Hey there KnightTeen! WOW. YOU. ARE. AN. AMAZING. WRITER. HOW. I. WISH. TO. BE. LIKE. YOU. I LOVE IT HOW THE STORY IS INSPIRED FROM THE SONG "INNOCENCE" BY HALESTORM. ...
Nov 1, 2013 -
Re: Optimism and Our Country of America
Hey PeanutPhoebe :) I love your essay :) I'm not a. American but I'm an patriot so I know how you feel :) Go America! And yes, it's us, the ...
Nov 1, 2013 -
Re: Promises
Hi again, DragonLily :) And WHOA. THAT'S ONE AMAZING POEM. There's no drawback in it except rhythm. But it's better this way. It's much more powerful (like LosCadaver said) this ...
Nov 1, 2013 -
Re: Hope
Hey there DragonLily! :) I really enjoyed your poem! I liked how you portrayed personification and metaphor. I liked your usage of the literary devices. Keep it up :) Though ...
Nov 1, 2013 -
Re: Lost in your words
Hey there artofthepen15 :) WOW! This is an amazing poem :D I loved it :) This is a very good piece but you MUST go through it on more time ...
Oct 21, 2013 -
Re: Unicorns Exist
Hi Blackwood :) Wow. I love this piece. It made me smile and think about my retarded best friends :p :D I love the ending, "Everyone who doubts us will ...
Oct 18, 2013 -
Re: How a waitress's smile saved a life
Hey there N1K1! Okay, so with the review: First of all, I LOVE THIS STORY. This is a truly great piece. Hats off. Nothing much is revealed about the characters ...
Oct 18, 2013 -
Re: Bathtub, Chicken, Daddy
Hi Ryan :) About the poem- Wow. One doesn't get to read poems like this everyday. This is truly an unique piece. But what I don't get is why the ...
Oct 18, 2013
