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This was a really funny poem. I kept imagining coming home one day and finding my father hunched over the bath tub splashing around with a chicken. And I could not stop grinning at my own imagination. This was a really simple and straightforward poem and I like how it describes a short incident. I also liked how you incorporated dialogue in the poem, and how it actually worked quite well in the grand scheme.
The fact that the narrator's father was trying to dress the cat in feathers so as not to upset his wife is humorous enough, that I do not actually need to imagine the scene. I wonder what will happen if the cat suddenly meows instead of clucking like a chicken usually does!
This was a really fun poem and I enjoyed reading this.
Keep up the good work and have a great day!
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