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Re: Down the rabbit hole
Hi there, InfinityAndBeyond! First off, I want to welcome you to YWS! I appreciate your comment on my poem, and I am here to return the favor. I want to ...
Feb 3, 2013 -
Re: We Are Finite Beings
Hi Mochi. I am GeeLyria, in case that isn't obvious xD, and I am here to review for you. First I would like to say that the thing I liked ...
Feb 3, 2013 -
Re: Second chance
Niteowl, hi! Geez! I am almost never in a romantic mood, but this gave me goosebumps and all. >.< Thing is that not only this song is about two people ...
Feb 1, 2013 -
Re: Neyri
Hi there! I am here to review. I am being honest when I say that I'm in love with your writing style. It is simple, but catchy, and well organized. ...
Feb 1, 2013 -
Re: I Still... (The Unspoken Words)
Woah, Senzafine! My Gosh! I don't think I can express how much I love the attitude in this poem! In my opinion, this is perfect; I wouldn't add or delete ...
Jan 29, 2013 -
Re: About a Day
Hi there, Rainn. I am GeeLyria and I'm going to review for you today. First, I want to let you know that the rhythm of the poem is fantastic; in ...
Jan 29, 2013 -
Re: Will I Ever Be Perfect?
Hi raised! I am GeeLyria and I am here to review fo you. But first I want to welcome you to YWS! I really hopr you enjoy it as much ...
Jan 28, 2013 -
Re: where love was made.
Hi there, harrington! First of all, I want to welcome you to YWS! If you have any questions about the site feel free to contact me. Now, let's get to ...
Jan 27, 2013 -
Re: A 500 word story - That Guy
Hi TheWorldIsMyLife. I am GeeLyria and I am here to review for you. I am going to be honest with you, I didn't quite enjoy this. And that is because ...
Jan 27, 2013 -
Re: The Stranger's Problem
Hi, Quistio! I am GeeLyria, maybe you have seen me around. Anyway, I am here to review! First of all, I want to comgratulate you for the start; it is ...
Jan 27, 2013 -
Re: No Worry Of Future, No Regret Of Past
Hi, Animal. I am GeeLyria and I am here to review for you. Well, this is how we will discuss this poem; first I will tell you what I did ...
Jan 23, 2013 -
Re: The Game
Petes! Hi, Petes! Hi. *waves ebulliently* I'm here to review. Or something like that. =D Lol. Alright. First, I want to talk about the punctuation when it comes to the ...
Jan 22, 2013 -
Re: Lightning Royale Chapter - 1
Hi, blakey789. I'm here to review for you, as requested. This is good, it's pretty entertaining and it shows you have the potential to write something big! However, I found ...
Jan 22, 2013 -
Re: What An Odd Little Star.
Aww... It's the TwistedMuffin!
Jan 22, 2013 -
Re: Its about time
Hi there, dikxita. I am GeeLyria, and I will be reviewing for you today. This poem is physically gorgeous, and I must congratulate you for that. Because the more attractive ...
Jan 20, 2013