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Re: Argument
Hello! First off, welcome to YWS! I'm glad you're around and I hope you're liking our virtual community. :) If you have any questions related to the site, feel free ...
Jun 30, 2017 -
Re: Translator
I am very glad that I was tagged by @Aley , and thus, sent here. Thank you, Friend. ^_^ I very much adore your topic, @vincentvinniealonso , for I, as ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: Just Live
Hi WeirdoPotato~ I'm here because I like yout username, to be honest. Haha! Welcome to YWS! My name is Solvy and I will be reviewing for you today. I will ...
Jan 18, 2016 -
Re: .
Hi, Dancer! Very interesting topic; I believe many of us have been there and we have done that! The fact that your poem is relatable is something good, and I'm ...
Jan 3, 2016 -
Re: The place where we can not stop to rest
Hi Jesse :) My name is Solvy and I will be reviewing for you today. I personally find this piece interesting because you are discribing a city through your eyes, ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Somedays
Hi Herbgirl! What can I say about your piece? It is relatable, yes; I believe we've all felt an associable kind of dispair, and that is something you could take ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: What If
Hi herbgirl I find this quite humorous, to be honest, and I like that the last line is crossed out; sometimes the best way to say something is without words. ...
Dec 24, 2015 -
Re: They Called it Major Depressive Disorder
Hi chelseamarie! This is not what I was expecting but in a good way. I second that, @McMourning. Your title kind of leads the reader to think this is something ...
Dec 21, 2015 -
Re: The Mermaid
Hi ashtheawesome12401! I'll be honest and say that I have no idea what Hetalia is, it's the first time I even hear about it, and thus, I will focuse on ...
Dec 21, 2015 -
Re: Fireflies
Hi Grogan! I see you're quite new around here. Welcome to YWS! From what I can see through this piece, I can say that you have potential; your lines flow ...
Dec 4, 2015 -
Re: Limbo
Hi VanillaXNight! I'm here to review, as I saw this piece was posted as an essay and it drew my attention. Right from the beginning, I noticed that this is ...
Aug 31, 2015 -
Re: School Days
Hi Noldor! I'm GeeLyria and I'm here to review for you. First off, welcome to YWS! If you have any questions about anything related to the site or how to ...
Aug 26, 2015 -
Re: Algebra review
Hi Pernicus! I'm glad to see you in the poetry section! :) Alright, so I'm going to try to review for you today. First off, I like this kind of ...
Aug 25, 2015 -
Re: The Interview
Hi Mialy! I like this poem. Not because I do not like teachers, but because it is a good example of how people construct their identity around their career sometimes, ...
Aug 23, 2015 -
Re: A Spark to write again
Hi CandyWizard! I'm glad you're back into writing, I wish I could say the same thing. XD I absolutely love it when writers write about their writing experience because it ...
Aug 22, 2015
