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  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic
    Re: Argument

    Hello! First off, welcome to YWS! I'm glad you're around and I hope you're liking our virtual community. :) If you have any questions related to the site, feel free ...

    Jun 30, 2017

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Translator

    I am very glad that I was tagged by @Aley , and thus, sent here. Thank you, Friend. ^_^ I very much adore your topic, @vincentvinniealonso , for I, as ...

    Jul 31, 2016

  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction
    Re: Just Live

    Hi WeirdoPotato~ I'm here because I like yout username, to be honest. Haha! Welcome to YWS! My name is Solvy and I will be reviewing for you today. I will ...

    Jan 18, 2016

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: .

    Hi, Dancer! Very interesting topic; I believe many of us have been there and we have done that! The fact that your poem is relatable is something good, and I'm ...

    Jan 3, 2016


  • Hi Jesse :) My name is Solvy and I will be reviewing for you today. I personally find this piece interesting because you are discribing a city through your eyes, ...

    Dec 29, 2015

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Somedays

    Hi Herbgirl! What can I say about your piece? It is relatable, yes; I believe we've all felt an associable kind of dispair, and that is something you could take ...

    Dec 29, 2015

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: What If

    Hi herbgirl I find this quite humorous, to be honest, and I like that the last line is crossed out; sometimes the best way to say something is without words. ...

    Dec 23, 2015


  • Hi chelseamarie! This is not what I was expecting but in a good way. I second that, @McMourning. Your title kind of leads the reader to think this is something ...

    Dec 20, 2015

  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Fantasy
    Re: The Mermaid

    Hi ashtheawesome12401! I'll be honest and say that I have no idea what Hetalia is, it's the first time I even hear about it, and thus, I will focuse on ...

    Dec 20, 2015

  • Poetry » Spiritual, General
    Re: Fireflies

    Hi Grogan! I see you're quite new around here. Welcome to YWS! From what I can see through this piece, I can say that you have potential; your lines flow ...

    Dec 4, 2015

  • Article / Essay » Narrative, Dramatic
    Re: Limbo

    Hi VanillaXNight! I'm here to review, as I saw this piece was posted as an essay and it drew my attention. Right from the beginning, I noticed that this is ...

    Aug 30, 2015

  • Poetry » General, Humor
    Re: School Days

    Hi Noldor! I'm GeeLyria and I'm here to review for you. First off, welcome to YWS! If you have any questions about anything related to the site or how to ...

    Aug 25, 2015

  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor
    Re: Algebra review

    Hi Pernicus! I'm glad to see you in the poetry section! :) Alright, so I'm going to try to review for you today. First off, I like this kind of ...

    Aug 25, 2015

  • Poetry » General, Humor
    Re: The Interview

    Hi Mialy! I like this poem. Not because I do not like teachers, but because it is a good example of how people construct their identity around their career sometimes, ...

    Aug 23, 2015

  • Poetry » Literature, General
    Re: A Spark to write again

    Hi CandyWizard! I'm glad you're back into writing, I wish I could say the same thing. XD I absolutely love it when writers write about their writing experience because it ...

    Aug 22, 2015


More than anything she wanted the world to be uncomplicated, for right and wrong to be as easily divided as the black and white sections of an Oreo. But the world was not a cookie.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Tree of Wishes