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Re: Part III "David" (of "Wallace Foster David")
Hi there Maximilia, My name is Graham and I am going to be doing a quick review for you. So I would like to start off by saying that this ...
Dec 1, 2013 -
Re: Feverdreams
Hi There TakeThatYouFeind, My name is Graham and I'm going to be doing a quick review for you! First I would like to start off by saying I really enjoyed ...
Dec 1, 2013 -
Re: Writing my plight (2 edition)
Hey there MorticiansDaughter19, I'm Graham and I'm going to be doing a little review for you today! First I would like to start by saying that this is absolutely brilliant ...
Oct 13, 2013 -
Re: Succubus
Hey there BaronFlame, It's Graham again with another punctuation review! :p First, not too bad with trying to add in some variation of punctuation, but with the way you write ...
Sep 10, 2013 -
Re: Shoes Strap Your Feet to the Earth
Hey there SparkOfDoubt, I'm Graham and I'm going to do a quick review for you! First I really like the message conveyed here, that some people will take advantage of ...
Sep 10, 2013 -
Re: Hold Me Down
Hey there GriffinClaw, I'm Graham and I'm going to do a quick review for you! Firstly I really enjoy the simplicity behind this poem. I'm also a fan of short ...
Sep 10, 2013 -
Re: Typical Love Poem
Hey there Amberchelli, I'm Graham and I'm going to do a quick review for you! First off i was initally drawn in to read this by your description, "a love ...
Sep 8, 2013 -
Re: Incubus
Hey BaronFlame, I'm Graham and I'm going to do a quick review for you! Fist off, your language and diction really sets the entire tone of the piece, which you ...
Sep 8, 2013 -
Re: Poetry Has Never Been For Me
Hey there WritersCanDream77, My name is Graham, and I'm going to do a nice review for you! I would like to start by saying that for your first poem, it ...
Sep 2, 2013 -
Re: Aine.
Hey there HighTop, My name is Graham and I'm going to do a quick review for you! First off this was a very touching and well written in the sense ...
Sep 2, 2013 -
Re: You think you know me?
Hey there HT, So I understand this is a rant, and I actually like it very much. Repetition when used in poetry can either be very effective, or it be ...
Sep 2, 2013 -
Re: Dreams.
Hey there GreenLight24, I'm Graham and I am going to do a quick review for you today! First i would like to say this poem was very well done! It ...
Sep 2, 2013 -
Re: Come Back To Me
Hey there Lyricalrebel! Great piece you have here and I think it speak very well to our age group. I really liked some of the more subtle aspects to this ...
Aug 31, 2013 -
Re: London Bridge
Hi there Kristina! My name is Graham and I'm going to do a quick review for you. This is definitely w well written piece. You did a very good job ...
Aug 30, 2013 -
Re: Sailboats in the Sky
Hey Bluebird943, First this poem is absolutely breath taking. The emotion seems to be really oozing out of your words and really speaking to me. the only things i would ...
Aug 30, 2013
