Frinderman

Hey Leela, I shall try to review you since I feel like reviewing and your work caught my eye! I won't drag anything on longer than I should so here ...

Okay time for a review thingy! First off, before I likely look overly critical, I need to say that I loved they idea of this poem and the tone of ...

I like what you did here and I felt this was great humor for Valentines day. I do feel there are improvements that could be done though. I am not ...

I would like to say from the start, I loved this poem and I personally found it beautiful. So I am not the best reviewer but I will try my ...

Okay, I enjoyed your poem quite a lot, however I need to state this first: You really ought to add punctuation and separation into stanzas because it was fairly easy ...

I liked your poem, it was cute and told a nice story. I have a few suggestions though. So first off, I agree with ElvenJedi about your rhyming, even though ...

I liked the poem and I can see aspects that made this more personal. I would like to give you a little friendly criticism however so here we go! First ...

I liked this poem however I found it hard to follow along. As far as criticism, there are a good few things to say but Ill keep it simple. First ...

I really enjoyed this poem as I love the theme. However I would like to make a few suggestions and point out a few errors. Try adding proper grammar and ...

I enjoyed this poem a lot, I liked the interesting theme of it (At least I thought it was). As far as criticism, there are only a few suggestions I ...

I loved this poem personally, although I have to state I am not the best critic. However I would like to suggest the use of commas and periods to separate ...

This poem was very enjoyable, great work! The only issues I saw were in two lines and some capitalization. "let you mouth part like a ripe pomegranate" "but you nails ...

As repetitive as this was, the meaning this poem had was very moving. As different as each persons lives are, everyone could relate to the message at the end of ...

Hey I wanted to let you know I really enjoyed this poem! I would like to point out a few things you could improve however: For one, you could try ...

This poem was very enjoyable! The theme of this poem was quite meaningful and it remained consistent throughout the whole poem. I would like to give some advice for this ...