Hi, here with a review. The title grabbed my attention straight away, and I really enjoyed this piece. I like how you've repetition and mixed physical scars with emotional ones, which gives this piece a great effect. It really makes the reader sympathize with the person who this is about. Overall, I loved your poem and I can see that this person is obviously is very emotional and expresses their feelings with this. If there's anything you want to say please do.
~Rosy234
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