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ForeverYoung299

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  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Narrative Re: The Santa Maria

    Hello. Welcome to YWS. Hope you have a great time here. If you have any questions, pls ask me. Now coming to the review. put on my coveralls and looked ...

    Mar 2, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Fading

    Hey, Forever young here to provide a short review. Ha ha. This is a great one. I found it quite similar to one of my poems and that is also ...

    Mar 2, 2021
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: The Conjecture

    Hello. I am @foreveryoung299 I am here with a short review. is you spend a lot of your life as a bull I might be wrong, but I think it ...

    Feb 28, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Example #2

    Hello. How to add to the quote generator? Where is it located? Is it something in YWS? According to all known laws of aviation, there is no way a bee ...

    Feb 28, 2021
  • Art » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: Male Gaze

    Hello. I am @foreveryoung299 and I am here to give you a short review. Overall, the story was excellent. As of me, this story had a deep meaning inside it. ...

    Feb 28, 2021
  • Poetry » Humor, Romantic Re: What love feels like

    hello. i am here again to review your work after your another work- how to take notes like a god. so,here, I am gonna use your technique to show you ...

    Feb 27, 2021
  • Other » Humor, Realistic Re: How To Take Writing Notes Like A God

    hello. I am foreveryoung299. this is my new username. i will try to describe what I felt while reading this. it was a great piece. moreover, this was so relatable! ...

    Feb 27, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: My Servant is an Ex-Hero! [ Chapter 1]

    hi. i am here to provide a short review in your work. this was a great read. it's quite good to hhook the readers. as of me, it is bound ...

    Feb 17, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: One day?

    i genuinely loved it! time for reviewing. let's try if I can The silence is a traitor to my ambition well, first of all, when I read the first line, ...

    Feb 17, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: I Choose You

    hello. i am 1234 and is here to give your poetry a review. okay, so let's jump to the review. first of all, the review will be a short one.don't ...

    Feb 17, 2021
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Lómë, the Maiden of Aloth Tiren

    hello. i am 1234 and is here to review your work. i am gonna provide you with a very short review. so, let's start the review. coming to the mistakes, ...

    Feb 17, 2021
  • Poetry » Satire, Dramatic Re: danger

    Hello. I am 1234 and I am here to provide you witha review. Hope you find it useful. Ok, so let's jump to the review. What a poem! I couldn't ...

    Feb 15, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Review Re: Life in the dust

    Hello. Here I am to provide you with an honest review. Hope you find it useful. So, let's jump to the review. Well. Procrastination! I opened your writing seeing this ...

    Feb 15, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Weeping Blood Book 1 Battlefield~Prologue

    Ok. So here I am to provide you with a very short, perhaps a precise review. Whatever, let's jump to it. All of the light brown wooden chairs where filled ...

    Feb 15, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: I walked

    Sorry for the comment below. I actually wanted to write a review. Hello. Here I am to provide you with a very short review. I am speechless. Belated welcome to ...

    Feb 14, 2021


Making the simple complicated is commonplace; making the complicated simple, awesomely simple, that's creativity.
— Charles Mingus