My Servant is an Ex-Hero! [ Chapter 1]

hi. i am here to provide a short review in your work. this was a great read. it's quite good to hhook the readers. as of me, it is bound to direct the readers to the next chapter.
well, I have a simple tip to give. i don't think a chapter can be so small. of course, if the chapters are too big, it isn't that interesting, but try to make your chapter a little bigger. i have a suggestion on this. you can curve out parts of your chapter. you can also add more tiny tiny details that can help the readers understand the scene more clearly and accurately.

this was all I had to tell. apart from these, I can't find any mistakes. overall, it was an enjoyable read. waiting for the next chapter.

hope the review helps. take the suggestions that actually helps you.

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),

Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!

First Impression: Well...this sounds like a really interesting story...I would certainly read on after seeing this as the first chapter. It certainly sounds like it has the potential to be a really interesting story, especially considering the title is quite intriguing too.

Anyway let's get right to it,

The Great Kingdom Of Audria, where humans, beastmans and elves work and live peacefully as fellow citizens of the kingdom. With the great craftsmanship of the humans, the magic superiority of the elves and the wide knowledges of the beastmans on every creatures and monsters, nothing could threatens the peace of the kingdom.

Until thirty years ago.

Thirty years ago, a growing cases of coordinated attacks from goblins, orcs and monsters alike struck the kingdom like a storm. Beastmans knows that this is a peculiar behavior for monsters to attack towns and cities alongside goblins and orcs. A lot of lives is wasted as the monsters destroys Audria's layered defenses of wall and forts one by one. The war was then known as The War of The Risen Wilds.

As the war to protect Audria is getting dire, a young adventurer shouted to the exhausted soldiers and adventurers to never give up as he jumps into the horde of monsters and slashes his way to victory that day.

Soon after, the tide of war starts to shift. Admired by the commanders of the Audrian Royal Army, the young adventurer was chosen to be the leader for one of the troop that would be the spearhead for the army against the monsters.

Under his leadership, the troop won battles after battles as they march through the monsters infested land lost by the first few attacks of the monsters.

The war is won in the next year. The adventurer was lifted as a hero of the kingdom. But there are still uncertain things. Things that wise beastmans still couldn't solve and its the cause of the coordinated attacks. And as for the young adventurer, he is gone few days after the war is won and nobody knows his real name. He was only known as Rito by his comrades but that was the only thing they know about the hero of Audria.