I walked

So this is one of my first poems(based on a dream that has happened to other people as well?) and it was made for my friend who I love so much and I hope some of y'all liked it and reviews very welcome and I hope you all have a great day! :)

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one day I started to walk and I walked and walked for hours 

even till the world felt sour and I didn't not 

know what I was doing there

at one point I started to ignore my body 

and a mind I knew I could not restore 

 but one day in my life I did not care

I was going stop walking fair and square

but then I had the urge I kept on walking my body growing weaker

the world kept growing bleaker as I walked 

but I was going somewhere with out knowing

but then I found my self in this strange path of green

it was I had never seen even when I first started to walk

I just stood there and gawked 

I turned around to see a woman there 

so tall all I could see were the tips of her hair

her head was all up in the clouds as if she'd never come down

her body looked like it was draped in the sky itself 

her body flaked with dark patches of muddy brown

but then her voice sounded so sorrowful 

I sound like it could make the world mournful

"my dear child I created you with my own hands you know" 

I did not know what to say her voice commands me to speak

but I did not know what to say that day

"hello" was all I could say that fateful day

"even your voice is as perfect as I pictured, I can even hear your 

thoughts why do you hate my creation why must you go and try to destroy 

and ignore it because it is so wonderful." water started to fall from the sky above 

and for once I thought of things outside of me and that when I saw she

her face was nothing and everything at the same time but I could

tell she held a smile of sorrow

"please my dear child don't break my heart for I made every beautiful part of you." 

a glass appears in my hand I drink and years pass by 

and for once since the start of my walk I smile

the clouds become a little lighter and then I begin to walk once more

I walked and I walk then I heard  someone talk

did you know there are others here too people who will become

sisters and brothers I didn't know that but they have started to talk to me

and for once I believe maybe I could one day be free