ForeverYoung299

Wowwwwwww It was heart-breaking. Through the poem, I could feel your problem. This society has imposed millions and millions of rules which I want to break and create a new ...

To be actual, it's hard to read. I really liked the background and the way you arranged the poem–it looks like torn pieces of paper. You did a good job ...

Hello MapleWay! Here to give a review. Your play is really fun! I am already a fan of it. Um...Gus will be gonna controlled by them. Isn't it? After that, ...

Hello. Here for a review. It was extremely funny. They are on their way to control the world, I see. Why are the people not understanding– those surge and vex ...

Hello. Here for a review. Hope you are okay now, i.e. after writing the poem. It was heart-breaking! I liked how you put up your memories in each and every ...

Hello. First of all, your school is a great school I would say. Your school gives students good works to do. Now, coming to the review. It was an awesome ...

Hello. Here for a review. No words were shared as the small battalion marched ever forwards. I think you could remove the ‘ever’ It seems rebundant here. They had no ...

Hello. Here for a review. I will review paragraph by paragraph. Sirrah Bear stood on the deck of the ship, looking far out to the horizon. He never really belonged ...

Hello. ForeverYoung for a review. You are a real good poet. It was am awesome one. You showed and elaborated how humanity is causing problems to the world and nature. ...

Hello. ForeverYoung299 here for a review. I really liked this poem. I loved how you arranged the poem and also the rhythm of the poem. Things always don't go as ...

Hello. Just clicked the title to see what you believe but this was a wonderful read. People say I don't belong, Where don't you belong??? It seems a little confusing. ...

Hello. Here for a review as requested Prologue This was an interesting one. This war was the war known as the war of Sol Here,you could remove the war from ...

Hello. Here for a review after reading act 1. This act was perfectly the equal as the former. I am gonna comment on paragraphs. Perfect! We're here. Now Vex, remember ...

Hello. Here for a review. Actually, I wanted to review act 2 but before that I decided to check it out. I am gonna comment on each paragraph. Mwah hah ...

Sorry for that comment down. I wanted to write a review. This was completely different from the other writings of yours. It was written in a very simple and lucid ...