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Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was an interesting story and really a good one for a flash fiction. Okay, I haven't read many flash fictions neither have I ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! Well, this was an incomplete short story and I didn't understand what to make of it. To me, it felt like a scene rather ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! Ah this was an ideal situations we can find people in. From what I understand, the story is about understanding love. I do have ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was a great piece over here. From a moment just after beginning, I started anticipating that something like this is going to happen. ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! For a rough draft, it seemed to be excellent piece. I really liked the thought and the concept of the story. Let's get into ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! Well firsr and foremost, I really don't understand why it has been termed as ashort story. From no angle, it appears to be a ...

Hey! Forever here with a review! As this is a scene, I am going to focus more on the sentence construction and the flow more. I was caught immediately by ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! Huh, this was indeed a realistic piece out there. You actually managed to put forward a very realistic work. It was seeing a very ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was a cool story. I really liked the world-building and the creepiness in it. However, I didn't understand a few things. Let's get ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was a beautiful piece here. I really liked how the mood of the story shifted in such a little amount of time. It ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! I thought I would continue, so here I am. Wow, this was really a great read. I really liked knowing all the tragic incidents ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! Oh this was a very creepy piece here. I too often have this fear of something unknown, of something which is not present, which ...

Hey!! Forever here with a review!! I don’t have a lot fo things to say about the particular piece except the fact that it was a nightmare and then she ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! That was an exciting read. I really liked how despite all the negative and creepy elements being present in the story, the ending turned ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! That was an excellent and yet a vague story. At a first read, I was indeed a bit confused about what was happening in ...