ForeverYoung299

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Witnessing the death of a respected and loved one

Ch 3 of my novel. Closing down of his business

Ch 4 of my novel where the couples plan to open a social account but it went dark on Alvaro's, a new character's advice

5th chapter which describes Cortez's life as a social influencer. And he will also get the request for first interview.Will he accept?What do u think?

Ch 6 of my novel. Cortez went to the interview in a good mood but what he saw was actually... find it out

ch 7 of my novel. Here he is caught red-handed. But, how?

Cortez went for acting and perhaps to play the role of the comedian but it was not for him. he has to find something else

Chapter 9 of my novel. Cortez finds another fabulous way to re-establish him. guess what?

Ch 10 of my novel. here, Cortez joins a cake company as a worker. but, behind that there are many more...

Last chapter of my novel!!!! Do check it out. I want to nail it and it requires many improvements.