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Re: When the time comes
Hello, Shikora here with a review. Let's get to it shall we. Okay to start of this was a really amazing poem I thing you wrote it very well, you ...
Jan 23, 2019 -
Re: 申日快乐-"Happy Birthday" - 2
Hi, Shikora here with a review. Now this is a nice start to a story, i see you are giving more away slowly, but you are giving us what we ...
Jan 22, 2019 -
Re: Sunbathing in August
Hello. Shikroa here with a review. Let's get to it. Now I really liked reading this poem. It was very well written. But I did see one thing and I'll ...
Jan 22, 2019 -
Re: An Incredible End
Hi Shikora here. This was a really nice poem you have here. the name was cool, that is what made me read it in the first place. So good job. ...
Jan 22, 2019 -
Re: Catatonic 01.01 (1388 words)
Hi, Shikora here with a review. Let's get to it. So this is a great start to the story you have planned. The name to your story is very hooking, ...
Jan 22, 2019 -
Re: fear of loss (what if the stars die when the sun comes up)
Hello, Shikora here with a review. Let's get to it by saying this is a really good poem you have here, and I had a lot of fun reading it. ...
Jan 20, 2019 -
Re: Perfect
Hello, Shikora here. Can I just start out bay saying, wow! This was a really good poem. Everything just flowed together really well. Every word meant something in this work ...
Jan 20, 2019 -
Re: The Light
Hello, Shikora here with a review for you. I know this is your first poem, so I'm here to help you out. So I really like this poem, the name ...
Jan 19, 2019 -
Re: Through the Snow
Hi, Shikora here with a review. Lets get to it. Wow this is a really nice poem you have here. I really like the name you have chosen, when I ...
Jan 19, 2019 -
Re: The Thief That Stole Excalibur (Part 3)
Hello, Shikora here with another review for your story. I've been waiting a wile so I'm really excited to review this for you. Now everything in this chapter was really ...
Jan 18, 2019 -
Re: I wish to stay forever
Hi, Shikora here with a review. So let's get to it shall we. So this is a really good poem you have here but I did see one thing, and ...
Jan 18, 2019 -
Re: untitled
Hi Shikora here with a review for you. Let's get to it. So the only thing I did see is that you haven't started any of your sentences with capitol ...
Jan 17, 2019 -
Re: The Waiting
Hi, Shikora here with a review. So let's begin. I really liked the name you have chosen for this poem, it was very interesting and I came to read the ...
Jan 16, 2019 -
Re: I Hate You
Hi, Shikora here with a review for you. So let's get to it. As I read your poem I did see one small mistake, it's just a spelling mistake so ...
Jan 15, 2019 -
Re: Telefail - Chapter 1
Hi, Shikora here with a review for your chapter. So let's get to it. I really like what you have here so far, when I saw the name to your ...
Jan 15, 2019