FireandIce326

Hello Hello Hello! I found this poem rather nice! Personally I love wishing on stars, so that made it even better! Haha. As far as nit picky stuff, I saw ...

Hello Hello Hello... This was good, and also very thought provoking. It is on the shorter side, but it is better to have a good short well written poem, then ...

Hey, this was well written. I do kinda agree with the comment above, it is a tad hard to read with the words being in white and all. But This ...

Hey! I thought this was very good! There is only one bad I would like to touch on really quick. You touch her neck and kiss her gently without a ...

Hey there! I liked this poem! It was very nicely written. I like how at the end of every stanza you repeat the phrase. I don't have anything bad to ...

Hey! Ok so while reading this I found a few mistakes that are a quick fix, everything I saw is noted in parentheses I've had friends before I know that ...

Hello there! Your poem was interesting. The rhyming and flow kind of through me off a tad. It felt as though it kept changing, and it confused me a tad. ...

Hey Hi Hello! This was quite an awesome poem! I enjoyed reading this very much. But in my opinion there was one thing that wasn't bad, but could possibly be ...

Hey there! I thought this was good. There was only one thing I was not to pleased about. When you wrote love doves at the end of the one line, ...

Hello hello hello. I thought this was quite enjoyable to read! I agree with sassykat. The no capitals was kinda weird for me. There was few punctuation, and that seemed ...

Hey hey hey! I enjoyed this! I like the formatting and the rhyming scheme. I could kinda feel the emotion put into this. It also had a very nice flow ...

Hey there! This is pretty good. Not great but good. My favorite part were the two lines at the end. I like how they were secluded, it brought more importance ...

Hey I really liked this! But there are a few things in my opinion that could be changed I went to the dance not knowing what to expect when you ...

Hey there. I thought this was pretty good :D The words were good and so was what you were saying. BUT even though it had the rhyming, and you broke ...

Hola haha, I don't hate it, but I don't love it either. I could feel he emotion in it, but it didn't seem to flow well when I read it, ...