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Re: Let The Sky Cry
Hi!! First off: Oh my goodness. This is amazing. Beauitfully heart-breaking. Your word choice is excellent. Every single word manifests a very sad, lonely feeling. You start off incredibly strong, ...
Mar 10, 2016 -
Re: When the Raven Falls
Hi!! Wow!! This is incredible! Very inspiring. I thought you had a very strong grip on the language. All of it had such a positive connotation. The imagery was so ...
Mar 10, 2016 -
Re: kite flying
Hi!! I really like this piece! It is awesome! I loved your word choice. To me, your language manifested confidence. It showed through clever word choice. :) The sadness in ...
Mar 10, 2016 -
Re: Rainy Home (Edited)
Oh my goodness. This is so beautifully written. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. So precious, so captivating, I loved everything about this piece. The imagery here was very clear, and ...
Sep 18, 2015 -
Re: My Grape Kisses
Wow!! This poem is fantastic. I love your writing style!! Your descriptions are amazing. I thought your word choice was very well thought out, and it was very appropriate. Your ...
Sep 18, 2015 -
Re: Unconditional Love
I love this!!! Your poem really amazed me. Your descriptions were original and so engaging (at least for me). I thought your use of language was very mature and appropriate ...
Sep 18, 2015 -
Re: Listen, Love
This is beautifull writing. I was so engaged in this from beginning to end, and honestly, I just sat in front of my screen speechless for a few minutes. This ...
Sep 18, 2015 -
Re: short-lived
Oh my goodness! This is amazing!! WOW! Everything about this poem was absoloutely awesome! It's clear to me that every word, every punctuation mark, was thought out carefully. You executed ...
Sep 18, 2015 -
Re: I did it for you
This is such an awesome poem! Wow. Your word choice was fantastic; it created such a haunting feeling. I was grabbed in by the first two lines, and you held ...
Sep 18, 2015 -
Re: A Little Willful Tragedy
Oh my gosh. This is beautiful! Every word, every line, is so perfectly crafted. I'm blown away. It's a little vague, but that's the way it's supposed to be. You ...
Mar 3, 2015 -
Re: Heavy
Wow. This piece is really, really beautiful. I can feel the sadness in this piece. It's tangible. It takes a true writer to be able to do that to the ...
Mar 3, 2015 -
Re: Small Things That Helped Me
This is beautiful. Wow. Your descriptions are so graphic and so dramatic. I love it. Your metaphors are original and I was captivated by every single one. There is such ...
Jan 20, 2015 -
Re: The composer
I think this is a spectacular piece, really. Your use of language was so fresh, so beautiful. The words were so enchanting. I share the same love of music, so ...
Sep 23, 2014 -
Re: Life By The Thousand
This is insanely good. I liked your title. I thought it was appropriate. Your first two lines were spectacular. "The trees lean into each other like drunken men staggering home." ...
Aug 8, 2014 -
Re: The Trees of Death Sleep Unafraid
This is so good! I really liked this! I was absolutely fascinated by the way you personified death. It was so clever the way you forced the audience to gain ...
Aug 6, 2014
