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This is a gorgeous poem - I also really enjoy the layout which I think is very creative, as is the whole concept. I agree with the other reviewer that ...

I like this - it's a fun concept. I think the twist pays off and is funny - you've balanced horror+comedy well in my opinion, so props for that i ...

I think you've done a really good job of conveying the emotions you wanted to in this short story - you can feel the anger + hatred coming from the ...

I think this was really well written and I enjoy the concept - I like reading/writing kind of abstract/vague, in the moment kind of short stories so I enjoyed reading ...

This was a cute poem that left me with a smile on my face, well done :D Maybe it's just me not understanding, but i don't really get the lines ...

I think this story's really cool! I like the idea on its own and I think it's written/executed really well. I haven't got much in the way of criticism or ...

I really like this poem. I think it's really easy to read and flows nicely The only part of the poem I don't understand are the lines "I wish my ...

Hi! Really loved reading this :) I thought your characters were really fun and this was a really interesting story to read, so congrats. Also, your descriptions are really vivid ...

Love this! I really like the imagery in the first verse, it's really interesting to think about what the moon's saying to her, and why. The second verse is good ...

This is honestly a great poem, I can feel the emotion you're conveying, well done :) The only part I had trouble with was the 5th stanza "We hug /but ...

Came here from Pending because I really loved the poetry there and I'm glad to say I love this too! I really like the opening "How far can a breath ...

These are all really cool! My favourite is probably one of the last two. The second to last one I assume is about a pair of gay lovers? "well worn ...

Loved reading this! It's easy to read and simple without seeming childish. I really liked the imagery, especially at the end. "peaceful, like a bird in flight" really creates an ...

I loved this. The layout and font really add to the poem, adding to the tone/emphasising certain parts. Repeating "learn how to" and then switching it out for "why are ...

These are honestly beautiful! My personal favourites are the second and third ones (can I also add that I retyped my favourites about 15 times, honestly it's so hard to ...