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Hey there Liz, Emm here for a review. I love fantasy/mythology so naturally this is something I would be drawn to. There is lots and lots of little technical stuff ...

Okay so I will do my best to provide a review. I myself will dabble in free-verse from time to time and think it can be pulled off beautifully however ...

Hello there, Emm here to provide a review. The concept was great I thought. The subject matter will turn off some but I am a rather morbid person and love ...

Okay Emm here to drop a review. Really good poem. I enjoyed it immensely and it was well executed. Some quickly tire of unrequited love poems, so far I have ...

Because you are Lucy the Brave I must review your work. First paragraph is something I think most young people can relate to and I find no criticism in it. ...

The sad thing is that the war against humanity is waged by humans! It is a nice poem. Dark of theme but that's great. Who couldn't use a little darkness, ...

A story about a writer getting accepted to publication? Seems rather catering to this audience, but a dream we can all relate to. There was definitely a plot element here ...

I think I have felt that feeling. I am a little unsure about the formatting here(we all know YWS can be difficult on poems sometimes). 'Feeling' is a good theme ...

I love the idea of terms and conditions and an asterisk. You loved every second of every minute and I think we can all relate. Friendship is something special, but ...

Standing and fighting are always good things. The second and third lines confuse me a bit though. You say you wont stop 'until night' and then 'till the darkness turns ...

Okay so the first two lines I loved, could have gone a lot of different ways with this... The third line I am lost at, and then a return to ...

Hey there lebanesecat. I am here to provide what I hope will be a helpful review. Okay some free verse. I really like free verse, it can be very liberating ...

Emm here to provide a review. I hope you find it helpful. At times you rhyme lines two at a time, other times three at a time and sometimes not ...

Two lines couplets, all rhyming; simple but nice, my favorite poetic form in fact. I would probably drop 'the' from the first line. Third to last line is too long ...

Okay so poetry is good. Ancient style poetry is great. Sometimes I myself attempt poems in the ancient Norse Eddic style. I think formatting is an issue here although I ...