Because you are Lucy the Brave I must review your work.
First paragraph is something I think most young people can relate to and I find no criticism in it.
The first line of the second stanza I am confused by, you might want to take a second look at that.
Last line of third paragraph should correct 'if' to 'of'(I think?).
Good conclusion!
Live!
Laugh!
Love!
Keep writing, a good poet you seem from this example.
Points: 897
Reviews: 44
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