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  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Narrative
    Re: The Little Mermaid

    wow, this just screams feeling, I have no words (but I do because this is a review, duh, so I'm going to say them) Glows I LOVE all the descriptions, ...

    Sep 20, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: My mixed up feelings

    wow, just wow. I have no words left to say. this poem really hit deep, because i feel exactly the same way. All I have to say is, It will ...

    Aug 1, 2021

  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: Home

    WOW, just wow, I almost have no words left to say (but this is a review so I have to say them) I personally loved this poem and 110% agree ...

    Aug 1, 2021

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Humor
    Re: Miscellaneous short poems

    Wow these were really great! and I too have also been recently been obsessed with poetry too, and I must say these are beautifully writen. I especially like the 3rd ...

    Jul 31, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic
    Re: Falling

    ooooooooo I loved this poem! And I know 'he' will too. Glows I loved the feeling that this poem gave out. It was almost like a mystery and suspense. I ...

    Apr 25, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Reaching Out a Hand

    Wow. just wow. I personally loved this poem, and the way you wrote it. Glows I loved the fay all the stanzas fit together. All of them ended at a ...

    Apr 24, 2021

  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative
    Re: The Rain Song

    OMGOODNESS i flipping loved this poem. It was absolutely incredible! Glows I loved all the similes you put in there- It gave the poem depth, and explained the kid of ...

    Apr 23, 2021

  • Poetry » Humor, Fantasy
    Re: The Witch Who Wrote

    This is a awesome poem! and I totally agree, witches are totally misunderstood. Glows I loved the way it rhymed- it made it way more light hearted and funny The ...

    Apr 23, 2021

  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Romantic
    Re: Only U

    Wow this is an amazing song. Like seriously, AMAZEBALLS. glows It had great descriptions- the way you explained your friendship with that person was impeccable it was flowy- it flowed ...

    Apr 22, 2021

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic
    Re: Sincerely, the one who you fell for

    hey v, e here for a short review (or a long one idk) This poem really caught my eye, especially since it reminded me of a certain author. (Lemony Snicket) ...

    Apr 19, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Unsaid

    Hey emivanz here for a short review (or a long one idk) This was such an amazing poem that I think we can all relate to. you wonderfully described the ...

    Apr 18, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Natives Chapter 1

    Hey v, E here for a short review, (or a long one, idk). My first thoughts of this was like, wow, just wow. You have created a wonderful little world ...

    Apr 18, 2021

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other
    Re: Life is a Blessing

    Hi emivanz here for a short review! This was an incredibly sweet poem that i quite enjoyed. Glows I loved the way it rhymed and flowed along in your head. ...

    Apr 4, 2021

  • Script » Humor, Science Fiction
    Re: A (Totally Not Evil) Bakesale, Act 3

    Once again you amaze me. This new act is just what the story needed to get it moving. Before this no one questioned the aliens and their plot to take ...

    Mar 31, 2021

  • Script » Humor, Science Fiction
    Re: A (Totally Not Evil) Bakesale, Act 2

    as I said on my last review of this work, this is amazing! You can make the most important person in all America seem like a little kid in less ...

    Mar 31, 2021


Poetry is my cheap means of transportation. By the end of the poem the reader should be in a different place from where he started. I would like him to be slightly disoriented at the end, like I drove him outside of town at night and dropped him off in a cornfield.
— Billy Collins