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Re: When the World Ends (aka: a love letter to friendship)
Hi Asriel :) to begin, I assume that this was written to your best friend. I like short poetry, because it often conveys the strongest feelings in the shortest amount ...
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Re: cover me in bubble wrap.
Hey there, friend :D To start, I want to say thank you so much for posting such a vulnerable piece here! I can imagine that it takes a lot of ...
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Re: withuimfound
Hello friend! First of all, you mentioned this is not one of your best works? Wow, I thought it was awesome :D I seriously look forward to the next poems ...
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Re: Mocha Tea
Hello there! Well, you mentioned how you wanted this to be silly & sweet and I think you did exactly that :D I love how simple this is! Oooh, I ...
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Re: sisters
Hey Avi :D first of all, I want to comment on how I really like your poetic voice! I love how it's simple, but you still have this very unique ...
Dec 7, 2024 -
Re: Out on a limb (Vent?)
Hey there, friend :D I decided to stop by for a quick review for this lovely poem of yours. To begin, I love how you did this rhyme scheme throughout ...
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Re: Sadness
I loved how this was so short but it really resonated with me and felt powerful in a lot of specific ways. She stopped me in the middle as I ...
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Re: Jacket
Hey Logan! I really like this poem because it's so simple! The formatting was really easy to be engaged with, which is something that I love in poetry a lot. ...
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Re: separation in rain
Hello again! I decided to stop by and leave a review for your other lovely poem! So, to begin, this poem seems to be even more relaxed in style compared ...
Nov 12, 2024 -
Re: burning farewell
Hi there!! But forever I never want there to be a day without you I maybe said it But somewhere in my heart Somewhere where the music starts Where the ...
Nov 12, 2024 -
Re: Our Song
This was a very sweet poem
Nov 9, 2024 -
Re: It gets louder
Hey (again!) I decided to stop by for another review :D Blood leaked from Marcus’ chest, yet Delaney could still hear the crying cello. Wow, that was a really powerful ...
Nov 9, 2024 -
Re: In Heaven, they are free, in Hell, she will bleed
Hey friend!! Oooh, I really liked the feel of this one. At least they’re happy in Heaven At least they can be together forevermore You do a good job, introducing ...
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Re: held by a memory, lost to a stranger
Hey Ley!! I loved this poem of yours so much
Nov 9, 2024 -
Re: winter crept in just like you did
Hey friend! Right from the beginning of this, it really caught my attention. With daylight savings happening recently, it has felt like it's so dark so early. how is it ...
Nov 9, 2024
