Elizabeth1

I really enjoyed your poem! You picked a great subject to write about! You really show how ignorant our society has become, how materialistic we have all turned into and ...

Hey! I think you have a nice piece here. If you add more detail and make the poem a bit more longer this can be a really great poem. Keep ...

Hey its Elizabeth1! I really enjoyed this poem a lot! It includes so much strong imagery that really helps express the meaning of the poem so well. Your description in ...

Hey I'm Elizabeth1 and here's my review! :) I want to start off by saying you're a great writer and you have so much potential. I also really enjoyed your ...

Hey this Elizabeth1 and I'm here to give you a review! First off, I think your style of making this poem an entire stanza/line was pretty cool. It distinguishes your ...

Hey I'm Elizabeth1 and I'm here to give you a quick review :) I really enjoyed your poem, it has a gloomy tone to it. I really enjoyed the last ...

Hey I'm Elizabeth1 and I'm here to give you a review! The first thing that popped into my head while reading your poem was "Wow, this is a really powerful ...

Hey! I'm here to give you a quick review! First I want to start off by saying that you truly captured the meaning/feeling of love in this poem. Your poem ...

Hey its Elizabeth1 and I'm here to give you a review on your poem! First off, I want to say that you have a lot of great potential as a ...

Wow, this is really good and I really love your poem! I love the structure that you used and that you divided the poem into three sections that each focus ...

Wow this is a really short, short poem; but I liked it! Remember to capitalize "butterflies" other then that I don't see much wrong. Your poem is short sweet and ...

I like this piece a lot. Writing about a subject like this is pretty difficult since everyone has there own opinion about suicide and death. I felt it was more ...

Hi I'm Elizabeth1 and I have a review for you! I really liked the repetition of "Why can't we" because it let's the reader know what the relationship used to ...

Hey! So I'm here to give you a review! I personally think that writing freely really demonstrates the imagination and creativity of a writer. I'm the same way, I don't ...

Hey! I'm Elizabeth and I've got a review for your poem! First, I really liked your poem's title because it really attracts an individual to read and wonder what it ...