Elijah

King here Hello there! I can not say that the previous path caught my eye so much with its story but I thought of giving the second part chance. The ...

King here This is my last review for the day and I am glad that it is for the work of someone I really am gladful to see again. I ...

King here Hello there! As the reviews before me have said, it is a very sweet and charming poetry in which you have put many details and gave us many ...

King here I really did not expect this to end this way. I can not say that person (the owner/hunter) needed to really shoot because they were only two kids ...

King here Hello there! Your work is adorable and sweet, using simple things to tell us about the different types of humans that appear in our lives. The messege is ...

King here Hello there! Your work is adorable and just stunning. It is sad that the spider lost his home in the end but its passion about this beautiful creation. ...

King here Hello there and welcome to YWS, I am glad to see so many new people joining the site to share their works with us! I would love to ...

King here Hello there! Your work is really good and it expressed true feeling about a real-life situation and current emotions of the narrator. I usually do not like each ...

King here Hello there! I hope you do not mind that I read and edit at the same time, I do not want this to become a problem in between ...

King here I can not really say a lots for this, mostly because I am no good with lyrics and the shortest types of writings and also because I think ...

King here Welcome to YWS! Hello there! I saw this in the green room so I decided to give it some love. I hope I help you with whatever I ...

King here Hello there! I see that you are new here (well, kind of?). I may be late and you might have been here from awhile but I still want ...

King here I do not know how to edit such a work as this one, a philosophy. But I will still try to do what I can to make this ...

King here Hello there! I noticed that you are very good with your short stories like this one. I really adore them, they are simple but still has this funny ...

King here Welcome to YWS! I feel like this review will be no longer than several lines because this is the lenght of the prologue we are having now also. ...