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Re: Upside - down
Very short review you will get from me now because I basicly do not have many things to tell you (complain i mean) so this won't be any long. I ...
Apr 14, 2016 -
Re: Falling In Love With An Idiot (Chapter 2)
Hey,raindrop here for a hopefully helpful review! I do not remember a lot from this work (part 1) because I reviewed it long ago but I will still review this ...
Apr 14, 2016 -
Re: I am my own Wife.
Flushed like a condom, oh...dear XD well I actually like the use of such words and that I do not see it usually! It is my favourite line surely! Well ...
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Re: Oblivion
This is very deep and sad but still so beautiful!Thank you for sharing this. I think your tittle is really catchy and your punctuation is totally fine. I like the ...
Apr 14, 2016 -
Re: Under the Sea
I love the ocean theme!I like the way you are so detailed about the scenery though most of it was only details about what we need to imagine/see is all ...
Apr 13, 2016 -
Re: Evening Firelight
The rhyme and the flow on its own is amazing.I like the way you write and when I read this it goes on forward so smoothly like it is prefectly ...
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Re: The Love of Music
I liked it a lot and the tittle itself was really dragging me to actually read this long work of yours.I think it is really unique and to take several ...
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Re: Don't Feed the Skeletons
Hey hey,here to give you a short review because the work itself is pretty short. I did not understand it at first so I needed several reads to get it.The ...
Apr 13, 2016 -
Re: Dogs, Cats, Is it a right act to abandon them?
It is nice to write about something like that! I really like it and your feelings are put in it perfectly. Sometimes I found some sentences odd because they were ...
Apr 13, 2016 -
Re: Once you let me go
I really like this story.I think this won't be a very long review because other people had already come and told you what is wrong with this writing.But I think ...
Apr 13, 2016 -
Re: When I was young...
Good good, very good poetry about being a small kiddo and doing whatever you want. I think I have nothing bad to say or compail about in this piece because ...
Apr 13, 2016 -
Re: Good, evil? Human.
I like how you compare the good and the evil/bad as dancers and their fight as a dance by itself. When you read it out loud ( like I also ...
Apr 13, 2016 -
Re: Nothing Yet
I love this poem,personally. I love the idea of it. It shows the daily struggles. It shows what the society these days is. You expressed this very well in this ...
Apr 13, 2016 -
Re: Suddenly poetry in boredom..and stress
I like the poem and I think it is relatable for most of us who had had a test week or just too much stress from it all.I do not ...
Apr 13, 2016 -
Re: Is It Only Me?
The photo can not look happy but I got it totally. The poor punctuation though made me stop reading,think and then start again. But it can be accepted as your ...
Apr 13, 2016
