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Re: Psychiatric
Well written,well thought of and it really expresses the idea very well. It is really sad,emotional and deep. It is very nice that you had made it in a way ...
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Re: Untitled No. 1
Hello,hello!Here to review this work. So, as I see, It is short so this review may be short also so sorry about that! So,let's start with this work correction: I've ...
Apr 16, 2016 -
Re: An Ocean Death Would Be So Beautiful
Hello,raindrop here for a short review for this short but beautiful work. So let's be honest,I do not think the tittle is okey for this work but I think this ...
Apr 16, 2016 -
Re: Endgame
I think this work is amazing.From all the works I had reviewed which were all yours,maybe this one is my favourite after all.Some places were with errors in the punctuation ...
Apr 16, 2016 -
Re: untitled no. 4
Raindrop here again for a short review of this beautiful work of yours! I will only correct several mistakes which are really nothing special to worry about. I think you ...
Apr 16, 2016 -
Re: The Real Apocalypse Happened Between My Fingers
Hello,hello here! Raindrop here checking the greenies here so came to check your work also. The tittle was something I did not understand and I thought that it won't have ...
Apr 16, 2016 -
Re: Volume 1: Chapter 1
Now I will start with this long hopefully useful for you review but before I start I want to say that I like the start and tht you are very ...
Apr 16, 2016 -
Re: Typo Alley~N Part One
Hello,raindrop here for a very very long review! Anyways,let's start with this review,shall we?I will write your story here and correct it on the reviewing and reading at the same ...
Apr 16, 2016 -
Re: Tirian Chapter 1:
Hello,raindrop here for a review! Going through your work and seeing what is wrong and what is right. This is the first part so I needed to start from here ...
Apr 16, 2016 -
Re: You Can't Lose Someone You Never Had - Elegy -
Hello,hello,Katiekat! I am here to review your lonely-looking short work now! I like the tittle of this work.I am usually a big critic so this is a plus point for ...
Apr 16, 2016 -
Re: How the Devil Fell for a Common-day Saint
Hellow,raindrop here,kiwicutie! I am here to check your short but still satisfying work now. So let's start with the first thing the readers actually see,the tittle. In my opinion it ...
Apr 16, 2016 -
Re: Sunflower Hill (working title)
Hello,raindrop here for a small review ( may not small tho ). So let's start with the tittle! I saw it while scrolling and it caught my eye so I ...
Apr 16, 2016 -
Re: To my Ex
Hello,raindrop here checking your short sad but still heartwarming work! The tittle made me check it and that is also needed the review. *checking the greenies here* So now that ...
Apr 16, 2016 -
Re: Delayed
Hello,raindrop here to review this work! I do not like seeing lonely zero reviews works! So let's start with the tittle.I like it but I think you could think of ...
Apr 16, 2016 -
Re: The quiet in the loud
The idea is good.I like the tittle, it made me check this out honestly so this is really a good plus for this work to get more review which is ...
Apr 16, 2016
