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  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: Psychiatric

    Well written,well thought of and it really expresses the idea very well. It is really sad,emotional and deep. It is very nice that you had made it in a way ...

    Apr 16, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: Untitled No. 1

    Hello,hello!Here to review this work. So, as I see, It is short so this review may be short also so sorry about that! So,let's start with this work correction: I've ...

    Apr 16, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: An Ocean Death Would Be So Beautiful

    Hello,raindrop here for a short review for this short but beautiful work. So let's be honest,I do not think the tittle is okey for this work but I think this ...

    Apr 16, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Endgame

    I think this work is amazing.From all the works I had reviewed which were all yours,maybe this one is my favourite after all.Some places were with errors in the punctuation ...

    Apr 16, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: untitled no. 4

    Raindrop here again for a short review of this beautiful work of yours! I will only correct several mistakes which are really nothing special to worry about. I think you ...

    Apr 16, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: The Real Apocalypse Happened Between My Fingers

    Hello,hello here! Raindrop here checking the greenies here so came to check your work also. The tittle was something I did not understand and I thought that it won't have ...

    Apr 16, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Romantic Re: Volume 1: Chapter 1

    Now I will start with this long hopefully useful for you review but before I start I want to say that I like the start and tht you are very ...

    Apr 16, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Typo Alley~N Part One

    Hello,raindrop here for a very very long review! Anyways,let's start with this review,shall we?I will write your story here and correct it on the reviewing and reading at the same ...

    Apr 16, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Tirian Chapter 1:

    Hello,raindrop here for a review! Going through your work and seeing what is wrong and what is right. This is the first part so I needed to start from here ...

    Apr 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: You Can't Lose Someone You Never Had - Elegy -

    Hello,hello,Katiekat! I am here to review your lonely-looking short work now! I like the tittle of this work.I am usually a big critic so this is a plus point for ...

    Apr 16, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic Re: How the Devil Fell for a Common-day Saint

    Hellow,raindrop here,kiwicutie! I am here to check your short but still satisfying work now. So let's start with the first thing the readers actually see,the tittle. In my opinion it ...

    Apr 16, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: Sunflower Hill (working title)

    Hello,raindrop here for a small review ( may not small tho ). So let's start with the tittle! I saw it while scrolling and it caught my eye so I ...

    Apr 16, 2016
  • Short Story » Other, Other Re: To my Ex

    Hello,raindrop here checking your short sad but still heartwarming work! The tittle made me check it and that is also needed the review. *checking the greenies here* So now that ...

    Apr 16, 2016
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Delayed

    Hello,raindrop here to review this work! I do not like seeing lonely zero reviews works! So let's start with the tittle.I like it but I think you could think of ...

    Apr 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: The quiet in the loud

    The idea is good.I like the tittle, it made me check this out honestly so this is really a good plus for this work to get more review which is ...

    Apr 16, 2016


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