Elijah

I won't deny it: I begged to stay. I turned back, made a ruckus. I fought to stay. About this part I would say that I just prefer the ' ...

Abusers image is the part I need to or feel like asking about. Abusers' image is right,I think,but maybe I did not understand it there. From the very start,the poetry ...

I see that you do not try to use very different and hard words to express your thoughts and feelings in this work.I like the way you write.Simple but still ...

20 words work? Good job! I personally like it the way it is. Even if that work could be longer but we talk about 20 words work so this is ...

Hello,here for a little short review! I hope it is still hopeful though. I want to say that this is really beautiful and least I,personally,would use this as a love ...

I really liked this poem and enjoyed reading is really emotional and full of inspiration.Makes me want to stand up and do something.I think everyone needs to have one of ...

This work really expresses the feelings of the young girls and women to fit into this model the society had made us accept.Every little girl can be asking herself the ...

This is a very emotional and sweet romantic story.Your punctuation is on point as I see at least by first is not anything so catchy as a tittle but it ...

I think that this is a very good start.I saw that you had edited it to look even more finished and well thought of.Good job,I could say personally.I still think ...

The beginning was really off and not that understandable to be honest.I am sorry that I start the review with something like that.I really think you had done a very ...

Hello,here for a short review! I do not think of saying so many critical words about this work.You do not need to regret writing this! I think it is very ...

The bad in this as a whole work at all was that you do not let the reader that I meant that you do not need to tell us what ...

Hello,here to review your work! This may be a short review and that will be because I am on a train right now but still yes came to check this ...

Comparing people to pens,ha? Hello,I like your work a lot and I think it has a very big potential but I really want to be honest amd tell you that ...

This work is amazing and I really like it because it is something different.I do not know if I understood it right but it felt like one person has to ...