my love is far away but i can still feel his presence
the hug he gave while going, touched core of my heart
with that warm hug he synchronized our heartbeat
that was, which i wanted for time he was not here..........
his essence is in me, deep down in my soul
i hallucinate him as i am addicted to him
m not alcoholic or druggy
its him who makes me feel high..............
a reverie just knocked my mind's door
what if he would have been here?
and there he is standing with a bunch flower in his hands
his eyes have some intentions to make love to me
and my body gestures give him that approval........
in my fantasy he gave all love to me
even i could feel his touch
this made me realize that how strongly i want him
now, just be back soon and love me the way you do.......
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Hello,here for a little short review!
I hope it is still hopeful though.
I want to say that this is really beautiful and romantic.At least I,personally,would use this as a love letter to send to my love.
It is really touching letter that shows what it is like to have someone as your lover far far away from you.But it is great that you show that the feelings you feel do not fade.
I know how hard long-distance relationships can be and this is a very good work expressing it all.
Good job.
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its an honour for me that people are liking my work alot..... 
feeling delighted that people are understanding the meaning of each word and its worth...... thanks once again 
Hi -waves wildly-, I am Soulfulwriter here to review and give personal opinion on your literary work of massive and wonderful art you have bestowed upon me....err...us.
Review: Nothing wrong with it. Except -throws glitter on it- PERFECT!
Personal opinion: This is another poem I would 'borrow' if I couldn't think of a darn thing to write to my love, if I had one that is. Sounds like a long distance relationship poem, but it oozes the feels and thoughts on paper. <---that probably didn't make a lick of sense. Anyway, I really do love your poem, I have poetry binges but they are usually dark and depressing. I am not that person, the way your poem is, that is how I am. But, I guess in the deep recesses of my mind, I kind of am dark and depressing. Once again, really satisfactory.
Keep on writing the right way.
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