Elijah

This poetry is really heart warming because of its end. It the beginning I really felt the sadness of this work but in the end I feel like you are ...

Hello there. Such a sad but still beautiful work I see here. I hope oyu are not feeling like this at the moment. I think we can all relate to ...

[maruqee] King Here[/maruqee] Remembering the days that passed, And as I hold his pictures in hand I think of how it's gone too fast. This is seriously my favourite part. ...

Welcome to YWS! I am glad to see more and more new members. I hope you find amazing people and friends here, and have fun. We try to help to ...

And as an otaku I could not leave this behind and not say anything about this work. I loke Sakura trees so this caught my eye. I could not bear ...

Or will stress Claim it's bride With death In its stride This spanza is seriously my favourite from this short poetry. I can not be sure who are we talking ...

I felt like you do not talk about shadow but some types of people in general. Sometimes, I find myself this type of a person also. I had found punctuation ...

Well, I have no complains to be honest! I just want to say that you had a very good job with this one. I like the way you had connected ...

This poem is really heart breaking and pretty understandable because in the way you show us the girl's feelings, we can actually feel like her and understand her thoughts and ...

Hello there! Here to check your lovely short poetry. I really adore that it is about such a matter. Even if sad this is something very beautifully written and worth ...

Hello there. I actually think you can do a better job with the punctuation. If you need or want to check how the full edit of mine for this work ...

I really like this poem even if the repeatment of the same line is kind of ruining it because it makes it pretty obvious. At least I love to see ...

Hello there! Saw that this is lonely with zero reviews and comments in the green room, so I thought that I may at least tell you about my own honest ...

King Here Hello there. I loved the previous parts of this story so I will try to help you with this part, also, even if I am still kind of ...

[maruqee] King Here[/marquee] Hello there and welcome in YWS! I hope you have fun here. I will try to help you even if several people already had done that for ...