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Re: Poison Lines
Hello there and welcome to YWS! I hope you find great friends and the motivation you need to write, review and whatever else you will be wanting to do here. ...
May 21, 2016 -
Re: Everlasting Life
King Here Welcome to YWS again and I hope I can help you out with some stuff and other jazz as we go through this work. I really liked the ...
May 21, 2016 -
Re: I fail as a boyfriend
King Here I think this work does not need such a edit as any other novel or short story. It is full of emotions and realistic feeling of love and ...
May 21, 2016 -
Re: Brief RP memory post. Reviews wanted. ~
King Here I think I needed to write this review a lot earlier but later than never as they say. I am here to do my best to help you. ...
May 21, 2016 -
Re: The great Blizario
King Here This was kind of a cool intro but it lacks the thing that can make me feel interested in this work. Still I think of following it if ...
May 21, 2016 -
Re: The Lion Age #1: Hunted *Chp. 7*
King Here Well, it was really a shock for me to realize this whole thing was a dream of hers but this needed to be expected from my side. Anyways, ...
May 21, 2016 -
Re: Dissection of a Fight
King Here The story is very sad and emotional. Something that is very realistic and happens in many houses even if we want to stop it. Sometimes the reason for ...
May 21, 2016 -
Re: I'm A Writer
King Here This work kind of started to look as a relatable one at the beginning because the monsters part under the bed. I thought about every small kid's fear ...
May 21, 2016 -
Re: Thanataphobic Thoughts
Hello there. I think I do not know enough about the phobia to review this to the fullest but this poem truly made me fear of everything around me. I ...
May 21, 2016 -
Re: The Mighty Have Fallen- Chapter 1
King Here Hello there. I am going to check and try to help with this work. The topic is very emotional and heartbreaking but still a very simple one. It ...
May 21, 2016 -
Re: It begins where it ends
King Here So strange that today I am only checking out newbies' works. What a day, ha? Anyways, to the work of yours. The capitalization is a problem here. Of ...
May 21, 2016 -
Re: In the Memory of My Grandmother
King Here I had the feeling that you are new when I saw the way you write and please do not take this negatively, it is understandable. As a first ...
May 21, 2016 -
Re: Einar (First Draft)- Chapter 1
King Here Hello there! I can not say that you are a very new member but I will still say welcome to YWS just to show that I am happy ...
May 21, 2016 -
Re: Chicago Chapter 10
King Here I do not know if I was invited to check this work or just did it because I had time and I wanted to but I still will ...
May 15, 2016 -
Re: In the Dark
King Here Hello there! I do not think I can call you a new member but I will still say welcome to YWS and hope you have fun here. I ...
May 13, 2016