Elijah

King Here My boring talking Have not read a good short story from very very long time. And this is a exellent one. I really have no complains because you ...

King Here Hello there, I know I am not so active but I will try to help you with this part at least. I will check it part by part ...

King Here Hello there, fellow writer, and welcome to this site. I hope you find good friends and helpful tips. I think your start was good and it dragged me ...

The only thing I could say it that the end was kind of complicated but still so beautiful. I am glad that I read this story. Their unit and creation ...

King Here The part with the reveal of his soul and no body thing was kind of confusing for me to be totally exact. I did not expect this addment ...

King Here To be honest I think it has no deeper description added to it. Many things repeat and I think you can find a way to make it more ...

King Here I am still kind of confused that he is talking about a cupboard as a very deadly weapon but I will just deal with this confusion by myself ...

King Here Hello there. I am pretty glad to see the next chapter already! I an really curious. Who is actually going to save her? I hope it is the ...

King Here Hello there. Just checking on this part. I did not expect to see one more for such a short time after the release of the previous one yesterday ...

King Here Hello there. This part was really action filled. Full of drama and trigger. It made me feel excited and interested. I think it was overall amazing if we ...

King Here This story was pretty much filled with so much mystery elements and secrets. The ranks and the reaper that appeared as a shadow. You had created a very ...

King Here I thought that I will not be writing any reviews today but maybe this one I will because it is a story I personally love to read. I ...

King Here I think this part of the story needs no editing, at least in my own opinion I did not find anything wrong with it so I will shortly ...

King Here I hope to see more of her past because the things that you tell us about hr past through her memories really confuse me even if I try ...

King Here Hello there! I saw the second and third part, being there all lonely in the green room so I will start with this part to be able to ...