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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: when

    King here Hello there! It is late at night here so I am better at focusing my attention to shorter works and be able to actually process, helping people to ...

    Sep 20, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Life as a Leaf

    King here I really like this! I said I will not write any more reviews but I just could not stop craving to review this. The simplicity is the best ...

    Sep 20, 2016
  • Script » Humor, Teen Fiction Re: Friends?: Scene One (Edit version)

    King here You have been here since a week and a bit more but I hope it is still acceptable to say you are a new member. If yes, welcome ...

    Sep 20, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: My biggest weakness is love.

    King here Hey there! Just passing by and giving 'short' notes of advices. I really enjoyed your work, it was romantic and full of very deep emotions. The thing that ...

    Sep 20, 2016
  • Other » General, General Re: The other two

    King here Hello there! Just passing by to leave a review. I will honest and say that 90% of what I read recently has the same 'issues' and I just ...

    Sep 20, 2016
  • Script » General, General Re: what I Am

    King here Hello there! I think that the tittle is very simple but still kind of appealing for me. There are stuff in this work that just turns me off ...

    Sep 20, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: same.

    King here I can not say I dislike this poetry because I do not fully understand, maybe I understand it in a different way it needs to be understood but ...

    Sep 20, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: hopeless

    King here Hello there! This is very simple and I do not fully understand what it is about but I still find it very funny honestly. It is just a ...

    Sep 19, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Past

    King here Hello there! Surely this is going to be my last review for the day before I go to sleep so yes, lets go to it! I really do ...

    Sep 19, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Rose

    King here I was even invited..oh well. Anyways, I really like this and you know how picky I am, dear. *jokenojoke* I trully like it. It is short and simple ...

    Sep 19, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: the ghost in the woods

    King here Hello! I see that you are new! I hope to see more of your works sooner or later as I think each person has to show their potential ...

    Sep 19, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: Stuck In A Tree House

    King here To be honest, I love stories like this; short and sweet. The only problem in this was the grammar and punctuation. Also a bit the repetitive stuff like ...

    Sep 19, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Two World: Chapter 1

    King here I think that this needs to be edited as a whole because there is a small mistake in everything if it is ver unfortunate to say this right ...

    Sep 19, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Two Worlds: Prologue

    King here Hello there, I am passing by and leaving some advices and opinion on the way. This is a prologue so I really did not expect much, and by ...

    Sep 19, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: I Wish I Could Take It Back

    King here Just casually passing by and giving small notes of opinion. I will just go with the flow and read and say my first most honest opinion with my ...

    Sep 19, 2016


Always do what you are afraid to do.
— E. Lockhart, We Were Liars