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Re: when
King here Hello there! It is late at night here so I am better at focusing my attention to shorter works and be able to actually process, helping people to ...
Sep 20, 2016 -
Re: Life as a Leaf
King here I really like this! I said I will not write any more reviews but I just could not stop craving to review this. The simplicity is the best ...
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Re: Friends?: Scene One (Edit version)
King here You have been here since a week and a bit more but I hope it is still acceptable to say you are a new member. If yes, welcome ...
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Re: My biggest weakness is love.
King here Hey there! Just passing by and giving 'short' notes of advices. I really enjoyed your work, it was romantic and full of very deep emotions. The thing that ...
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Re: The other two
King here Hello there! Just passing by to leave a review. I will honest and say that 90% of what I read recently has the same 'issues' and I just ...
Sep 20, 2016 -
Re: what I Am
King here Hello there! I think that the tittle is very simple but still kind of appealing for me. There are stuff in this work that just turns me off ...
Sep 20, 2016 -
Re: same.
King here I can not say I dislike this poetry because I do not fully understand, maybe I understand it in a different way it needs to be understood but ...
Sep 20, 2016 -
Re: hopeless
King here Hello there! This is very simple and I do not fully understand what it is about but I still find it very funny honestly. It is just a ...
Sep 19, 2016 -
Re: Past
King here Hello there! Surely this is going to be my last review for the day before I go to sleep so yes, lets go to it! I really do ...
Sep 19, 2016 -
Re: Rose
King here I was even invited..oh well. Anyways, I really like this and you know how picky I am, dear. *jokenojoke* I trully like it. It is short and simple ...
Sep 19, 2016 -
Re: the ghost in the woods
King here Hello! I see that you are new! I hope to see more of your works sooner or later as I think each person has to show their potential ...
Sep 19, 2016 -
Re: Stuck In A Tree House
King here To be honest, I love stories like this; short and sweet. The only problem in this was the grammar and punctuation. Also a bit the repetitive stuff like ...
Sep 19, 2016 -
Re: Two World: Chapter 1
King here I think that this needs to be edited as a whole because there is a small mistake in everything if it is ver unfortunate to say this right ...
Sep 19, 2016 -
Re: Two Worlds: Prologue
King here Hello there, I am passing by and leaving some advices and opinion on the way. This is a prologue so I really did not expect much, and by ...
Sep 19, 2016 -
Re: I Wish I Could Take It Back
King here Just casually passing by and giving small notes of opinion. I will just go with the flow and read and say my first most honest opinion with my ...
Sep 19, 2016
