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  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Put Down The Blade

    Hello, here to review for my darling Cheese! So I’m going to review this for ya! I liked this and as a self harmer I can see where this is ...

    Sun May 25, 2014 12:12 am
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Pain and Heartache

    Happy review day! Here to review. On the first stanza the last to lines bother me a bit. They don’t sound well together and if you reread them you will ...

    Sun May 25, 2014 12:06 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dear Disney

    Hello Retro, I’m here to review! Happy review day! Okay, so let me praise you! I’ve always loved your poems, they are simply beautiful and this one is no exception. ...

    Sat May 24, 2014 11:57 pm
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: Another day.

    Hi Secrete, it’s Dorothy here! I really like this poem. Nice flow, good punctuation, and a relatable theme! I didn’t see any mistakes and my favorite part of this poem ...

    Sat May 24, 2014 11:52 pm
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: Always look back.

    Hello! I’m here for a review on this beautiful review day! Go Read All Over! Mmkay, anyways. For some reason I thought I already reviewed this, guess not, okay, anyways, ...

    Sat May 24, 2014 11:52 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Please wake up, we miss you.

    Hello! Sarai to review! Mmkay, It seems this poem is either about suicide, or losing a romantic interest/partner. Either way, I really liked it. It flows nicely and is a ...

    Fri May 23, 2014 2:29 pm
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: Cinquain Poem; Death

    Hello dead person here to review!!! Mmkay! I liked this poem. It's a simple yet elegant cinquain, very beautiful and I like the death theme, as you can guess why ...

    Fri May 23, 2014 2:20 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: What To Do?

    Sarai here to review! Mmkay, I like this, especially the rhythm, but as I'm going to do with the rest of my reviews for you, I'll pick a favorite part ...

    Thu May 22, 2014 6:28 pm
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: A Great Man; Now A Dead Man

    Hey Secrete! Sarai to review! I liked this poem, it flows nicely and is easy to read. Your stanzas are well written and the whole poem is structured very well. ...

    Thu May 22, 2014 4:43 pm
  • Other » Other, Realistic Re: Society

    3rd review for you! Mmkay, so I'll get right to the review. Honestly? I didn't like this as much as some of your works. I understand what point you are ...

    Thu May 22, 2014 4:38 pm
  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical Re: I'm a Little Writer

    Mmkay. Sarai here to review. If you haven't guessed already I'm trying to review all of your poetry folder. Anyways, to the review. I liked this, it made me giggle. ...

    Thu May 22, 2014 4:33 pm
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: The Eye

    Mmkay. Sarai here for a review! Hi cheese!!! Anyways... You totally gave a whole new perspective on eyes. (You have pretty eyes by the way.) okay, anyways, I really liked ...

    Thu May 22, 2014 2:50 pm
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: Hypocrite

    Sarai here for a review! Mmkay, really liked this, it was nice. Flows easily and gets your point across while still remaining a piece of beautiful poetry! Okay, I really ...

    Mon May 19, 2014 4:37 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sameness

    Sarai here for a review! Mmkay, I really liked this! Flows nicely, and has a good pattern. This is me putting my fingers to my lips and going "mwah"! Okay ...

    Mon May 19, 2014 4:26 pm
  • Poetry » Literature, Other Re: And they just watched, hungrily awaiting their turn.

    Sarai here to review! I really like this poem, it flows easily and I could see some one reading it out loud easily. I really like the italics to put ...

    Mon May 19, 2014 1:52 pm


Should we not walk? On our feet? The ones I now have again? I do like my feet. They are befittingly perambulatory.
— Pattern (Rhythm of War by Brandon Sanderson)