Eferhilda

Firstly, I get the feeling of having your work just sound like a bunch of jumbled images all rolled into one. It is rather frustrating and annoying, but rest assured ...

There is a sadness to this piece that I find very enchanting? If that would be the word to use at this moment, but I also enjoy the imagery very ...

This started off a bit...odd? To me and I know that has to do with the word choice which is what another has commented on. Otherwise, once you get past ...

Initially, when I started to read this I was expecting something different, which is largely due to my own mind making me hum some old 80's song. However, after getting ...

Beautiful. This speaks a lot about the injustices in the world and how it is all right there before us, there for us to make the change into something else, ...

A lot of powerful words and imagery in this piece, I was very impressed from beginning to end.I know another pointed out how you capitalized the words at the start ...

A very powerful piece here. I love how it speaks about the callousness of the world around us and how often people cannot be bothered to pause in their busy ...

As someone who ends up cleaning the house often I can relate to the visual aspects of the poem very well. As someone whose life just never seems to stay ...

The way that you have written this is great, I have only read something from one other person that so completely immerses the reader into the world of the writer. ...

A good read overall, like the others I thought I had misread something or misunderstood because of the whole Buddha thing lol Only, thing I would say that in the ...

This was meant to be a review so I reposted it to be one. ------ This felt like it could have been the excerpt to a larger book or story. ...

I definitely enjoy how simple and to the point this is. The wording flows beautifully and conveys the message clearly without there being too much if you get what I ...

This poem speaks to me and I know others (evident of their own comments and reviews). Not sure really where to begin because I could not find fault in this ...

There were just a few tiny spelling errors, but that did not take away from the story at all. You did a really good job in the first person and ...

Eferhilda here for a review! There are just a few grammar and spelling errors, that do not take away from the story at all. Which is really, really good! I ...