ERZA

Wow such a narrative and sing song type of poem! Liked it very much!! I could get what you were trying to get at but I think the poem was ...

Wow I am speechless!!! This is similar to the Darker than Black anime but this is in text but none the less good.. I am not comparing its just that ...

Ah teenage love! Sigh! Ahem! Anyways lets get this started!! So it look like you wrote a poem about your crush and teenage love in general right?? Sooo this is ...

Wow such a mesmerising poem! Anyways before I review I need to get this clear..please try to do it in stanzas...   At that time I was innocent, and my ...

Ok this is a bit of an action (?) Typr of poem and honestly I have never read such types of poems. But I will try my best to review ...

This is a very fine piece of work...you could make it something of a trailer to promote some novel of yours that you could write based on this lol but ...

I am guessing that all those days are related to their respective chapters right?? If it is then iys such a good idea! Good thing reallyy to write poems like ...

Like seriously you could have written here-"SPACE RESERVED" That could have worked fine if you were planning to submit later but is this even fair or legal?? Make sure it ...

You write awesome poems!! This piece is a beauty! Well I have nothing much to say about this since you were just giving a description of the general scenario of ...

This episode lives up to the genre!Though it does not have much action it sure does have mystery and suspense...Also I would have liked it better if there was little ...

Wow such a beautiful much expression. Though there was not much description I could get the picture perfectly. The mood is ok and then there is a flow too. Like ...

Looking at your poem I can say that you don't write much poems!:-D:-D Anyways are you aware of the way to write poems or is it just basic writers instinct ...

Such a nice poem you've got in there...its like a flowy hymn or something...the way that you present it but when one reads it...its sounds different so I suggest modification...well ...

Hey!! I am ERZA! And I am here to review your poem.... This is basically a poem about freedom and how you if were a bird you would live free...visiting ...

Um I will only review the translation since know only English..... Good job with the translation...I may know nothing about the original piece but translating someething is always a hard ...