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Hi epic here! Wow I love this, I love the old English words too such as "thou" and "looketh" this really captured my attention as the reader. I love how ...

Hi Epic here, So I loved this. I love how relatable it is and the emotive language used is lovely. My favourite part was "You ache for the escape, yet ...

Hi, epic here. Alright so there weren't any stanzas. It was all just spread out into one large stanza with not much structure going on. This review is going to ...

Hi, Epic here for a review, Wow, I must say, Woah. This poem nearly has zero flaws. I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. The one thing I did notice, was that ...

Hello, Epic here! Sorry if this is too short but everyone has explained everything and I haven't read chapter one yet. I don't usually review chapters so it's kind of ...

Hey Epic here First off I think this poem is great, you have explained what you are trying to say well and I understood it. First thing, there are no ...

Hi Epic here... I thought this poem was pretty good. You expressed you words through the poem as if it were a personal thing. I think you could have added ...

Hi. I really like this first chapter and I hope to read more of it soon. I hope you continue this story because it's amazing!!! :) I like how you ...

Hi, Before I begin can I just say that I'm so glad I can review chapter 1. I'm glad I caught it on the first chapter. :) _____________________________ Ok lets ...

Hi Kelpies I think I know what this is about. But it's very hard to understand, ~~~~~~~~~~~ It needs stanzas. It is in desperate need of stanzas! I think you ...

Hi, I really enjoyed this poem. It's short and snappy however some verses flow better than others. When I read this, I read it in my head so the way ...

Hello! Wow this is awesome right now I'd love to be one of those friends you mentioned I'd love to have a friend like that. They are lucky to know ...

EPICnumber1 here for a review... I don't think I have ever reviewed one of your works before but here goes nothing... I love reviewing poetry. Wow I thought this was ...

Hello EPICnumber1 here for a review.... Well I certainly enjoyed this! I couldn't stop giggling to myself. It went through a lot emotions like anger oh and craziness and randomness. ...

Hello EPICnumber.1 here... I love poems especially this one but I didn't quite understand it and it was hard to follow. I really like the last line 'Relax! You we ...