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DreamWork

Knight of the Dark

  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Spiritual Re: Where it only gets Better

    Hello there, here is a short review on your song lyrics. Firstly, I absolutely love the lyrics. I told you, that was amazing! The same with the music, that it's ...

    Dec 17, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: Someone Else Has it Worse

    Hi FCsis, highlighting of something hovering in our heads is absolutely worth it to do. Moreover, you do it in the form of creative writing: a poem. Here, the speaker ...

    Dec 17, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: Just Another Shadow

    Hi Shine, a quick review on your poem here. I have seen a lot of poems about the darkness, but even I have tried to write it down (but failed). ...

    Dec 16, 2013
  • Other » General, Other Re: I am, You are, It is.

    Hi there, Dream with a short review on your poem :) First of all, I saw something that you want to convey in your poem. It's a different style of ...

    Dec 16, 2013
  • Poetry » Supernatural, Dramatic Re: Infection

    Hi there, a short review on your poem. Well, I like the concept you make here. I think I almost got it, but yet you still have to make it ...

    Nov 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: "In Search of Peace"

    Hi there, well this is a beautiful poem to me. So I will come with the quick review for you. Your poem is short and emphasizes each word given in ...

    Nov 16, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: i bought a star

    Hi HighTop, I come with a short review for your poem today with a small lamp to illuminate the implied meanings also to make sure I am not burn when ...

    Nov 15, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I am a Mirror

    Hi fortis, you use the mirror as inspiration in your poem this time. It's a good choice and you can use different ways to talk about the mirror. Say about ...

    Nov 15, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I'm Sorry

    Hi dear, have a good day. A short review for your wonderful piece of poem. Well, I like the concept here. A poem filled with feelings expressed in each stanzas. ...

    Nov 13, 2013
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: Crepuscular

    Hi there, this poem is so beautiful to me. You managed to express your imagination in this poem. With a picturesque, attractive and enthralling ways. The crimson moon rises, In ...

    Nov 12, 2013
  • Poetry » Politics, Realistic Re: Together, The American Way

    Hi there, have a good day. Indeed, it is a good poem. It is against injustice from various angles. It's got a clear political element as well. The American way ...

    Nov 12, 2013
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Wolves

    Hi there, I was so impressed with the diction you use. It is have an emotional impact with the details given on the wolves that comes out at night. Moonlight ...

    Nov 12, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Winter

    Hi Alpacalypse, have a good day! Thankfully, I also like to write a sestina. So I try to review as far as I could. I noticed you give three lines ...

    Nov 11, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Stop

    Hi SJ, I like what you want to say here. It's like a mind of its own that are rioting heart to stop writing[ the writer's block]? Your poem is ...

    Nov 10, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: The Thought of Travel

    Hi there, so the title of your poem has drawn my attention to read it. I start with the ideas which you give in every stanzas. In the first stanza, ...

    Nov 10, 2013


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