There is always that one,
Special kind of person.
That makes you want to be,
Who you are when you are with them.
But if the night turns black,
And we're left in the cold,
And the pain,
Of the words that we said and were told.
But this is where it only gets better,
Life will move on and the storm will weather,
Away, in the waves of the never ending tide.
And I promise you, that you'll be fine.
There's going to be those times,
When you are weak.
There's going to be those times,
When you fall to your knees.
But when the days go black,
And you feel all alone.
Don't cry,
'Cause nothing is set in stone.
'Cause this is where it only gets better,
Life will move on and the storm will weather,
Away, in the waves of the never ending tide.
And I promise you that you'll be fine.
So go out and go for a ride,
Living your life and never say goodbye...
(Instrumental)
Can you feel the world keeps spinning?
Twisting turning,
And we're still living.
Smiling smiling,
Always laughing.
Never stopping,
Always flying.
Loving loving,
Till we're singing.
Keep it going,
Keep on breathing.
Climbing climbing,
Till we're soaring.
Soaring soaring until we are shining...
'Cause this is where it only gets better,
Life will move on and the storm will weather,
Away, in the waves of the never ending tide.
And I promise you that you'll be fine.
You'll be fine!
'Cause this is where it only gets better,
Life will move on and the storm will weather,
Away, in the waves of the never ending tide.
And I promise you that you'll be fine.
You'll be fine...
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Ful media file, dunno why the bottom one wont work xD
You write songs!
MarS
You sing songs!
And play guitar along it !!
*impressed*
P.S. D'you know, that you have a baritone ?? Like those old-time singers (e.g. Paul Anka, Cliff Richard, Andy Williams, Patrick Swayze)??
But yeah, I agree the recording system ain't too great or maybe try singing with a little high key.
*presses [follow] *
Thanks, I don't know. I group up with Garth Brooks and Allen Jackson, so I wanted to sound like them.
Oh! Nice then.
You have Ossum talent, Ossum! Keep going!
~Timmyjake
Thanks man, it means a lot ^-^
Hello there, here is a short review on your song lyrics.
Firstly, I absolutely love the lyrics. I told you, that was amazing! The same with the music, that it's okay and inspiring. Although the music sounds a bit awkward in some parts (but I liked the beginning), I was still satisfied with the lyrics you write.
This is my favorite part!
I also like the rhythm that you created at the end of a sentence. It not only beautifies the song and lyrics (sounds good) but also it is fun to create them.
Overall, this is a nice lyrics to read. You surely got the talent! Just keep writing here in YWS.
Kudos, cheers
Thank you very much ^-^
And I know, I feel terrible cause the recording kept getting.. i dont even know what when I exported it and made some parts kind of weird sounding. But I'm glad you enjoyed it ^-^
It's not weird, just trust should be improved so that the beat does not change drastically. I have no problem with your voice, it sounds good to my ears. Lol
Oh, thank you then ^-^
And as I promised ladies and gentlemen who have been sticking by me, here is me singing this song. With original guitar playing as well. I am sorry that it sounds so raw and my voice is well... raw too lol. It is my first time using any kind of recording program and I am no pro at making it sound like how I actually sound. But this was the closest one and I hope you enjoy it.
Thank you ^-^
http://roaming-initiative.com/mediagobl ... tter-af9f/
beautiful song country boy
.....keep it up
Thank you ^-^