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Knight of the Dark

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The overdue judgement

    Hi there! Title of the poem makes me a little unnerved. The overdue judgment reminds me of something horrible. But it also sounds like a hope for the oppressed people. ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Happy Place (prose poem)

    Hi! Just based on the title of the poem, it gives the reader a glimpse of what will be in the poem. A happy place may giving the reader with ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Fantasy Re: Hero

    Hi! I will start with a detailed review in each part of this poem! Because there are many questions that lingers around in my head while I was reading it. ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Light Bulb

    Hi SJ, have a nice day. Just a quick review on your wonderful poem. I actually like the title of the poem that looks ambitious as encourage the reader to ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Don't give up...

    Hello there, have a nice day! Just a quick review on your poem. The poem certainly inspires the readers. I like the tone of voice that seemed to motivate the ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Dracula`s Heart

    Hi there, have a nice day! The title of the poem really attracted me to read it. I though it tells the story of a vampire/Dracula. Apparently it was just ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Scales

    Hi DfP, Dream with a quick review on your awesome poem! I love when you use the first person view in this poem. It is much easier to understand and ...

    Dec 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Lyrical Re: Mineralized

    Hi there, Dream with a quick review on your awesome poem! First of all, I think I need to spend some time to review your poem. Thinking about how wisely ...

    Dec 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Ingrained stars

    Hello there, have a great day! I am really impressed with you poem here. Although it is expressed with a sad tone of voice, you are still able to make ...

    Dec 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Science Fiction Re: Come Along, Pond

    come along, Pond. I admit, it's tempting to use the element of repetition in the poem. But it should be noted about why it needs to be repeated, is it ...

    Dec 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Science Fiction Re: Home, The Long Way Round

    Hi there, a quick review on your poem here. I was quite impressed with the imagination that you create in the poem. Including ideas about your dream to be in ...

    Dec 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: At the House on the Hill

    Hello there, a quick review on your poem here! ;) What I like about the poem is the flow that goes well with some rhythm which created effectively to form ...

    Dec 19, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Who is the sane man?

    Hello there, a quick review on your poem here. Based on the title alone, the poet has submitted the question of insanity. It is through the ideas of the opinion ...

    Dec 19, 2013
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: Rush of Wind

    Hi Jabber, I will only review the effect / impact of the poem because it seems you have a problem to break the lines (problems with the formatting) of your ...

    Dec 18, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: I want to fly.

    Hi SJ, a short review on your wonderful poem here. Firstly, I could feel the deep impact of this short poem. I believe the the last line is more prominent ...

    Dec 18, 2013


You'd better wise up, Pony... you get tough like me and you don't get hurt. You look out for yourself and nothing can touch you, man.
— Dallas Winston, The Outsiders