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Re: What you'll never see
Hi arianaSarroyo,here is Dark to give review on your poem. First of all,I love the theme you want to show up quiet nice poem to read. # If no one ...
Sep 14, 2013 -
Re: You Have Killed Yourselves And Ourselves.
Hi rbt00,what a great poem you just wrote here!This is truly amazing to me. Straight to the point here.I really like the theme that you want to bring here. The ...
Sep 14, 2013 -
Re: The Generation
Hi tgirly,here is Dark to give review on your poem! Let's go to the points here: # We’re the next generation. We can explain. We were raised this way. It’s ...
Sep 14, 2013 -
Re: Rumored Friends
here is Dark to give review on your poem. First of all,it is a poem that means here. I really like the diction in your poem that seems outspoken and ...
Sep 14, 2013 -
Re: The Water
Hi,EmilieHaugaard.Actually,I like you poem so much!But the rhythm just ruined it.What?--Yeah,you should add some more punctuations here--commas that it will be more enthralling to read.Or maybe becaus
Sep 14, 2013 -
Re: That of a Friend
here is Dark to give review on your poem :) Firstly,I know what you are trying to convey here,and I like how you use a friendship theme here.Verses in your ...
Sep 14, 2013 -
Re: A Collection of Profanity-Laced Poetic Musings
Hi there here is Dark to give review on your wonderful poem here! I love the theme and your views on love,the scars,poetry and the people who: "declare they know ...
Sep 13, 2013 -
Re: The Taste of Mirrors
Hi creativityrules,here is Dark to give review on your poem! I like how you submit your opinions and feelings in poetry,which leads to a common theme but was reworked into ...
Sep 13, 2013 -
Re: I Wanted to Say
Hi GriffinClaw,my gosh,you have just expressed what I felt in is true and indeed a statement that embitter our feelings. # Some of you will hate my topic My rhythm, ...
Sep 13, 2013 -
Re: I see the patience of Chinars in winter...
Hi shoaib,so here is Dark to give review on your poem. I actually like the theme revolve around Chinars strength during the winter.The strength and perseverance of them can be ...
Sep 13, 2013 -
Re: It Raining
Hi Ahmed,here is Dark to give review on your poem! First of all,I like your piece of imaginary here.And the simile 'dropping like a pearl',seems like you mis typo the ...
Sep 12, 2013 -
Re: As The Soul Sinks
Hi there,spacesoldier.Have a good day,so I have a time to review on your poem that is really have such a deep meaning here,for sure :D #The wind blows as the ...
Sep 12, 2013 -
Re: Can You Grasp It In Your Hand?
Hi spacesoldier,here is Dark to give review on your poem. I really like the way you point up the ideas here,it just so nice and meaningful to read here.I love ...
Sep 12, 2013 -
Re: The man who held the world
Hi StefanosVorkas,so here is Dark to give review on your wonderful poem! First of all,I agreed that this poem is kind of romantic (easy theme to grab) but you make ...
Sep 12, 2013 -
Re: Reflections on John 10:11
Hi Snoink,here is Dark to give review on your poem. I love this poem so much!The words you use are enough to make me unnerved. I mean, it really touched ...
Sep 12, 2013
