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Knight of the Dark

  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: colors of him

    Hi Ely, have a nice day. It's like a short story that looks more like a poem that tells your expression of feelings toward him. You are good at playing ...

    Dec 22, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: landline

    Hi summer, it is really an interesting poem you got here. The ideas are just simple but amazingly you manage to catch attention through this part of your poem. "gets ...

    May 6, 2016
  • Other » Humor, Satire Re: -

    Hi there, have a nice day! I think it is quite interesting as you just get ideas for writing. It does have its own strength even though at first I ...

    Aug 18, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: Marching Band

    Hi snazzy! Have a nice day. Just a quick review on your poem. I realized that I had not been actively review a poem lately, so forgive me if it ...

    Aug 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Window

    Hi there, just a quick review for your poem :) Firstly, I liked the idea you have here. It is short, simple and straight to the content and the message ...

    Apr 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: The Angel Belief

    Hi there. It is rather interesting poem with the theme is more to be fantasy. Whether it's about the 'another life' or the world after death, I believe it is ...

    Apr 14, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Magazine

    Hi there, just a quick review for your poem. I really enjoyed reading it and you have an interesting title where you can find inspiration through it. It makes you ...

    Jan 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Halfway

    Hi Deane, a quick review for your poem :D This is awesome, you have a lot of poetry that I've read that reveals your own way when writing a poem. ...

    Jan 16, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Solidute

    Hi Aley, a quick review on your poem. You have a catchy title for your poem and it really gives a sense of the uniqueness of its own. Explore the ...

    Jan 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: I Missed.

    Hello, a quick review on your poem :) Firstly, I loved the way you develop the ideas from the begining until the end of your poem. What I understand is, ...

    Jan 15, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Brain Dead Creativitiy

    Hi there, a quick review on your Short poem. Okay to be honest, the poem to me is unexpected with simple point but yet matching with the title ﹋o﹋. But ...

    Jan 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: Realistic Fantasy

    Hi there, just a quick review to show how much I love this poem. A catchy title. And the point is somewhat cliché but succeeded in the end. I was ...

    Oct 5, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Unsilenced War-Chapter 2

    Hi soul, just a quick review on this chapter. You begin the second part of the novel very well and wonderful, but there are only a few things that I ...

    Sep 28, 2014
  • Script » Dramatic, Historical Fiction Re: Homecoming (Part 2, Revised)

    Hi, a quick review on your script! :) It seems there is a problem with the format of the script its supposed to. But I will not comment on that ...

    Sep 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Realistic Re: The Games Of the Wild

    Hi there. It's review day :) What an interesting title here. The wild is a complex puzzle of many sorts choose the wrong move and it's over be careful where ...

    Sep 28, 2014


You are not the voice in your mind, but the one who is aware of it.
— Eckhart Tolle