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Re: colors of him
Hi Ely, have a nice day. It's like a short story that looks more like a poem that tells your expression of feelings toward him. You are good at playing ...
Dec 22, 2016 -
Re: landline
Hi summer, it is really an interesting poem you got here. The ideas are just simple but amazingly you manage to catch attention through this part of your poem. "gets ...
May 6, 2016 -
Re: -
Hi there, have a nice day! I think it is quite interesting as you just get ideas for writing. It does have its own strength even though at first I ...
Aug 18, 2015 -
Re: Marching Band
Hi snazzy! Have a nice day. Just a quick review on your poem. I realized that I had not been actively review a poem lately, so forgive me if it ...
Aug 17, 2015 -
Re: The Window
Hi there, just a quick review for your poem :) Firstly, I liked the idea you have here. It is short, simple and straight to the content and the message ...
Apr 15, 2015 -
Re: The Angel Belief
Hi there. It is rather interesting poem with the theme is more to be fantasy. Whether it's about the 'another life' or the world after death, I believe it is ...
Apr 14, 2015 -
Re: Magazine
Hi there, just a quick review for your poem. I really enjoyed reading it and you have an interesting title where you can find inspiration through it. It makes you ...
Jan 24, 2015 -
Re: Halfway
Hi Deane, a quick review for your poem :D This is awesome, you have a lot of poetry that I've read that reveals your own way when writing a poem. ...
Jan 16, 2015 -
Re: Solidute
Hi Aley, a quick review on your poem. You have a catchy title for your poem and it really gives a sense of the uniqueness of its own. Explore the ...
Jan 16, 2015 -
Re: I Missed.
Hello, a quick review on your poem :) Firstly, I loved the way you develop the ideas from the begining until the end of your poem. What I understand is, ...
Jan 15, 2015 -
Re: Brain Dead Creativitiy
Hi there, a quick review on your Short poem. Okay to be honest, the poem to me is unexpected with simple point but yet matching with the title ﹋o﹋. But ...
Jan 14, 2015 -
Re: Realistic Fantasy
Hi there, just a quick review to show how much I love this poem. A catchy title. And the point is somewhat cliché but succeeded in the end. I was ...
Oct 5, 2014 -
Re: Unsilenced War-Chapter 2
Hi soul, just a quick review on this chapter. You begin the second part of the novel very well and wonderful, but there are only a few things that I ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Homecoming (Part 2, Revised)
Hi, a quick review on your script! :) It seems there is a problem with the format of the script its supposed to. But I will not comment on that ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: The Games Of the Wild
Hi there. It's review day :) What an interesting title here. The wild is a complex puzzle of many sorts choose the wrong move and it's over be careful where ...
Sep 28, 2014
